Reviews for Slowly Undone
Dream.Live.Wonder chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
This story is great, good grammar, correct spelling and capitalization (a big pet peeve of mine), and the plot isn't over done either! Too good to be left on a cliffhanger
xInfiniteKittyx chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
I really like the idea and hope you continue it. I really want to see where this goes :)
kasey chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
Love it. I know its been a while, but pls continue.
Souldarkalone chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
va actualizar esta historia? porque es realmente buena y me encanta el comienzo por favor actualice :) seria una pena que no actualice porque de verdad me gusta :(
xoxinoune chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
:( so sad that you re probably never going to update this story have so much potential everything is good your writing the splot the way you describ things you really should have continuing :)
Sivadkrista1447 chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
I like this story, it has real potential to it! Continue!:)
LightLessStar chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
good story so far!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Sooo... Not gonna update, huh?
wInChEsTeR bRoS iNc chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Love it! Please please please please update soon!
overkalix chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
You have a very promising start here! I like the concept, and your writing style carries the story beautifully. Please do continue!
SleepyGirl27 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Love this! Please please continue :)
AlElizabeth chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Great start- well written, gripping! Can't wait to read more- I think you should definitely write more for this story!

Poor Dean and John- I feel soooo bad for them, hopefully they find Sam soon.

Poor Sam, being brainwashed by that guy. Wow, that sicko who kidnapped Sam is one fucked up person.

Please update soon! :)
SupernaturallyEgocentric chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Very good beginning. I'd definitely like to see more.
lomm9 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
Great Start

Please update soon
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