Reviews for Circles
Guest chapter 54 . 4/24
I don't really get it. Back then Malchior said "No, I can see in the dar- with very little light.". He had been about to say he could see in the dark. Now he can't?
Guest chapter 56 . 12/21/2016
It's really good! But I don't really understand why "Raven" would be the good in herself and something else her demonic side. Like, if Raven would be HALF demon shouldn't she then represent both parts?
Freedom's flight chapter 56 . 8/9/2016
Loved it! This is easily one of the best story's I've ever read! Extra exclamation points!
Shame about the not getting the sequel:( but still absolutely love your story from start to finish!
P chapter 7 . 7/25/2016
I have to admit, kind of hoping for E, but with Wheatly's undeniable charm, B seems very likely.

Love you story so far and can't wait to read more.
TheRealityBender chapter 43 . 2/12/2016
I love your story! No matter how much I try I seem to hate Lady Eisen with a fiery hit passion. I love Rorek and Malchior's jealousy!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
Did you know that Raven's name is actually Rachel Roth?
taimurpro chapter 56 . 10/8/2015
dude u can continue the story u can add that the voices that raven hears wasnt only th god and the titans but demons too and powerful dragons and she was a dragon hafl demon and half human i dont know how but do it you can make almost extra 30 chapters if not more when she says the thum that was in her dreamscape that the god gave her rorek and malchior well know she was the child of the child of pahmonah and her real father was the father of dragon and when she knew the truth the memeory of her past life well return and she remembers that she imprisond the gods and the titans with some help then she remember everything every spell she used even deep magic and the seal of the gods has been weakend and then the gods make her see illusions that about malchior rorek has hated her and everyone and the only way to change herself to touch the mirror and break the circle when she does that she returns to the real world and she must fight the gods the titans and demons with her friends and the justice league to save the world.

U can change stuff of it and every things but please make the story really tall and try to type it fast please and circles was one of the best stories i read and im not joking
3PurpleRaven3 chapter 56 . 9/13/2015
I can't find the sequel. Did you really post it? Anyway I loved the story, it's just one of those that you will not forget.
Some of the parts are making me die of laughter over here. I'm pretty sure that my parents are kinda worried.
Keep up the good work :)
Zelara chapter 47 . 4/11/2015
You know you've been watching too much Doctor Who when you think The Silence before Slenderman
Raven A. Evans chapter 33 . 4/6/2015
What shadows was Ru talking about? And what's with the dolls?
GoldenFlame chapter 4 . 12/15/2014
Guest chapter 7 . 12/12/2014
Since "likes, dislikes, hobbies and so on" corresponds with the answers in the parenthesis, "violet, dogs, various arts and so on" then is it safe to assume that means Malchior likes the color violet, dislikes dogs, and is interested in various arts?
Nathanel chapter 56 . 8/23/2014
For the most part I really liked this story.
However here are a few gripes and nitpicks

Myth Gripes:
Not all the Greco-Roman gods were evil or even mean; Hades was a fair ruler of the dead, due to his stoic heart. Even Ares despised rape and made it a point to always fight on the side of the underdog. He was demonized in Homer's writings due to the author's Athenian leanings; the Athenians despised the Spartans (who were Ares' chief worshipers). Thanatos was the god of death, not the act of murder; this is shown by his general attitude, lack of infamy, and his brother being Hypnos (the god of sleep).
The reason the gods defeated the titans was because several of the titans either helped the gods or refused to get involved in the Titanomachy. Hyperion (the Titan that fathered Helios/Apollo) was mentioned a whole five times in all of the Greek Mythos, he invented astronomy and was the god of the Sun and stars, he was tot distant to care or know of mankind.

Writing Nitpicks:
Slade dies off screen (the fact that you hand-waved away Mother beating his hellfire with blood magic didn't help). and nobody reacts in any meaningful way. No witty puns or jokes by Cyborg, no mourning by Red-X, not even a "good riddance" by The Other? Seriously? When his will was read I was at least expecting a semi-surprised "He actually cared?" from Raven or a tear from Sebastian (awesome name choice by the way, he was my favorite character XD). Terra appearing with all her memories intact had no impact at all due to lack of foreshadowing and felt like you attempting to ship BB with Terra at the last moment (not that this is a particularly off-putting flaw, I like them as a couple myself). Damien gets shoved into the limelight for a whole three or four chapters and then does nothing of note for the rest of the story. Raven's male god just deciding to up and stop bothering her was WAY too convenient. You could have easily added in a plot twist of him being just a kinda lazy and detached (but not mean or bad) titan like Hyperion or Tartarus himself

Aside from these gripes, this story is pretty damn good. It's leagues above Spellbound and Spellfire. Favorited and subscribed.
Guest chapter 39 . 8/7/2014
reading that part when raven woke up and yelled at rorek and his only thought was "which one was rorek again?" made me think of a line from a video game i played. it'd be like her asking, "rorek, can we talk?" and him simply responding with, "I'm having trouble comprehending 'Rorek' right now. maybe later?"
Guest chapter 9 . 8/6/2014
The phrase "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" comes to mind. I like it so far though!
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