Reviews for A New Beginning |
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![]() ![]() WAAAAAAIIII I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! amazing chapter, I SAW WHAT YOU DID THERE, AND I AM SOOOOOOOO HAPPY ITS GOING MY WAY! (HAH, sweetheartstogether!) anyway, i simply adore how its going so far, and im about to take a page outta sweetstrawberrysmiles' book and BBUGG YOUUUUU HURRY UPPPPPPPPP AND UPPDAAATTE MOREEEEEE! anyway, good job, look forward to the next chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally! The one day I'm not there and you decide to go post another chapter! It's really good, a few typos but still amazing! 3 3 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I loved the descriptions of heather, Lucy and Tina. Who is this mysterious boy I wonder? Some guy who's got it out for the malfoys? Loved it. Be quicker next time please hun xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this so far, keep going? |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this story. continue please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very common idea to write upon. Hopefully you can spice it up a little, make it different. :) Its quite intriguing the way it is, but hopefully it comes with a twist. I also noticed quite a few errors throughout the story. Perhaps a beta? :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gosh there is an oc named Amy! Oh my golly gosh! Thank you do much! Anyway it is a very good chapter and I loved hearing about pig! Who is tallulah? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me lovie! Please continue. IMMIDEATELY. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! They're gonna be friends right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() :O ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why'd you end on a cliffy? It was really good! I love it! And thanks for mentioning me sweetheart 3 |