|Reviews for Surprise|
| Kate chapter 5 . 10/16/2013
Really good! Are you making more or is it the end? Anyway it's a great story! It's simlar to another story on fan fiction I read which was about Chris and Jill having a baby :)
| deanandjo4ever1 chapter 5 . 10/22/2012
Cute. Maybe you could skip forward a few years to re6 and jake and that would be a big old mess hehe
| x-Artichoke-x chapter 5 . 8/24/2012
Aw! This chapter is soooo cute! Like adorable.
I love how Chris loves the little girl anyway, and how he and Jill interact it is just so cute and fluffy. And I know he's okay with it now, but I could see him finding it harder in the future. From what I've heard having a child is stressful haha, so perhaps their relationship could become strained :o
So sorry for taking so long to review, unfortunately had to travel up and down my country too many times. I hope you update soon, I keep forgetting schools would be starting in like a week...I want to go back to school! *cries*
Great job, I really look forward to more!
| Bearybeary chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
That okay, just do your school time first.
| celticank chapter 5 . 8/20/2012
| WhathappenedtoJill chapter 4 . 8/16/2012
Lol! A lot of funny parts, all of which I will name xD
Well, for one, Chris buggin' out in the beginning was hilarious xD
Second, when the nurse said that Jill probably had a high pain tolerance, and then afterwards Jill was like "I did until now." Haha.
Understandable how Chris reacted to Desirae's appearance...loved how Claire told her brother to "grow a pair." lmao.
Been awhile since you updated this, I see! :(
| x-Artichoke-x chapter 4 . 7/24/2012
I love that Chris had a minor freak out! It was definitely needed, and even more so that the child has Wesker's eyes. I really liked that, it was believable. And if you're looking for more ideas, that's something that I think can definitely come back as a storyline, as in Chris's inability to look beyond the eyes. That can create some angst. As hard as Chris tries, he finds it near impossible to love the child as much as he should. And then comes in the self doubt that he isn't good enough for Jill or the child. And his inner torment would be glorious! And of course believable, Wesker haunted him for 10 years, it's understandable. Plus it would create tension with Chris and Jill, drama! Haha.
I also really like that Claire's in the story! I love Claire, I hope she continues to feature a bit!
Great job! I look forward to more, plus that was a quick update! Good! HAha.
| WhathappenedtoJill chapter 3 . 7/17/2012
:OOO Wow! Terrible timing lmao. I like the name you chose for the baby :) Lmao, if only Wesker were alive to find out that he produced a daughter...
| WhathappenedtoJill chapter 2 . 7/17/2012
Aw it's a baby girl! Another neat chapter :) The only concern of mine is that the doctor's dialogue and Claire's dialogue seemed kind of rushed. Like, the doctor announced the gender and then he was like byeeee! Same with Claire xD
I still liked this chapter though :) I think they will find out that it's not Chris's baby though when she gets older?
| WhathappenedtoJill chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Oh snap! I like this so far! Please continue :)
| x-Artichoke-x chapter 3 . 7/16/2012
Bleh...the review below is mine...Probably could have guessed...Stupid fanfiction... XD
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/16/2012
Ah I'm so glad you're back! I've been missing ChrisxJill, and they finally kissed...But jeez that baby has bad timing haha. Chris is such a sweetheart for staying with her. And don't worry about skipping time ahead, it has to be done in pregnancy stories I always feel. Oh I look forward to the baby being born!
Okay what the baby will look like, apologies I may become a little too scientific here, but I like things to be as correct as they can in stories, inaccuracies annoy me haha. Hair colour is polygenic inheritance, so affected by lots of genes, but if you simple it down and pretend it's monohybrid inheritance, the brown would be dominant. But if Jill is heterzygous then the baby could be either blonde or brown. So scientifically you can chose either. I would be inclined to go white blonde, and then as it goes older the colour darkens. Which often happens with children with very blonde hair.
Eye colour, again is affected by polygenes. Without getting too complex, just go blue. If you want it to have Jill's eyes I'd call it bright blue, and if it were Wesker's eyes I'd call it more grey blue, just to make a difference. Wesker has smaller eyes as well. Wow, I'm sorry there are a lot of big words in there and kinda got absorbed in my biology...I adore science... Bahaha
Anyway, science out of the way, I would say the baby has white blonde hair (which will darken with time), big grey blue eyes, and a button nose like Jill. Haha, there I'm done. Always if it has the blonde hair I think it will be harder on Chris, and I would love to see how he copes with it.
Great chapter, I look forward to more!
| Phoenix-KaZ chapter 3 . 7/15/2012
Good story. I'm interested in what will happen after the baby is born.
As to suggestions to the baby's appearance: Blue eyes are a must, since both Jill and Wesker had blue eyes. (Wesker did before he injected himself) As for hair color, dark hair is dominant over blonde, so the kid is likely to have Jill's hair coloring. (Assuming that Jill has gone back to being a brunette.) I've done enough genetic rambling, so long!
| Darth Wesker chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
But then, who was phone?
| Bearybeary chapter 2 . 5/15/2012
Yes but she might strike resembles of albert wesker.