WWWAAAAA!
Scott why couldn't you have just turned invisible and watched them rather than interrupt their beautiful moment together!? You suck!

Story had me in tears... why couldn't Ororo just choose Logan in the first place? Then there wouldn't have to be so much sorrow between them in this way...
Loved it though, *wipes tear from eye* Also love the picture that you chose for the title, it goes very well with the scenario...

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I'm sad for this story...But it is very realistic. And I must say that I have always hated Scott. ;-)

I don't know why I didn't read it before. This story's great. Love the relationship between Scott, Ororo and Logan. I think they have shared so much history that their interactions are always interesting. Thanks for this.

This was good...really, really REALLY good! I have just started becoming a fan of this pairing and I liked how realistic you portrayed everyone in this. Sometimes the best romance stories are one that are bittersweet and unforgiving. Great job!

Great story. I felt the passion and the tension. They need to go on that picnic...

This is the pairing I always thought Marvel should of explored more in the X titles.

How terribly bittersweet! I think you have done a beautiful job with this one. I feel real sympathy for all of the characters in this story. Beautifully written.

Very sad, but I really like it. Stories without fluff is sometimes good.

Okay, well you should be able to figure out who I am, since I can't put my full name on here for some reason. -_- Anyway, I love this story so much, I can't stop reading it. Please write soon. And a little word to the BP fan, THEY'RE NO LONGER TOGETHER.

Plus I HAVE read the BP comics, they were a cute couple at first, but after limbo, it went downhill. So sorry, the divorce was comin'; we all saw it. RoLo has taken over and the BP/Storm fans are just gonna have to deal with it. Hey, you should write a story to celebrate them getting together! You're the best person I can think of to write it (I'm sorry, but I'm in no league with you're writing, despite my attempts, but you always seem to top me no matter how hard I try to top you ;) )

Epic

I don't know what to think about this story. I kinda hate it but it was good dont get me wrong I hate it cause of the ending but it was still I don't know I guess kinda real, kinda bittersweet even.

damn scott and his logic, grrr...panther should mysteriously die, and stay gone forever. I love it though, amazing

Awesome story darlin'! Loved the credit scenes. My favorite though has I be the one where they were just sitting there eating. That was just too good.

Great story!

Lol wow someone is a little cranky at all the rolo love here :)*Hehee*just embrace the chemistry u knw u wanna...Darlin I do hope u write a bit more to this one shot,I've read it over n over and each time it makes me want more I'm so curious to what you would write to go with it*eyes wide open and gleaming*