Reviews for Just a little more
four-nostril chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
Well, I'm blushing to much to leave a coherent review. It's very ... um ... very ... hey look a typo!
"Is it tuning you on?" *turning

But seriosly, it's well written and straight to the point. And also NOT STRAIGHT, obviously. If you ever decide to continue this, it could benefit from a nice long build-up to a hot scene like that. Clit in the first line made me jump a bit - wasn't warmed up yet!

I root for them now. Go go go!