Reviews for Tensions
laurie chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
Потратив много времени, пытаясь другие средства, чтобы получить мой любовник назад я решил дать эту мощную заклинателя под названием Доктор KUVUKI возможность увидеть, если он сможет принести мой любовник обратно ко мне .. я обвинял себя в конец целых вещей, навсегда сомневаясь полномочия д-ра KUVUKI потому через помощь доктор KUVUKI моего любовника вернулся в пределах периода времени 48 часов, которые мне было настолько шокирующим, потому что я никогда не думал, что доктор KUVUKI собирался быть состоянии принести моего любовника обратно. Желаю всем те, которые имеют проблемы там отношений или брака успеха, как они, свяжитесь с доктором KUVUKI через эти детали ниже по электронной почте: , потому что я считаю, что , способна спасти и восстановить ваши отношения с любви и романтики .
scarletskies123 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Doesn't the one between 11 and 12 translate to "No in Russian, America"?
AnimeCrazy1995 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I like this sooooo much :D I had a difficult time to read the text as it was but it was cool :D
Keep the good work up 3
RayenOfDeadStarsAndPlanets chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Freakinig awesome! I love it!
XxRussiasMinionxx chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
GAHHHH THIS WAS FLUCKING AMAZING .
iamrebornthruhim chapter 1 . 5/30/2012
funny story bro :D y havent more people reviewed?
Miss Macabre Grey chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
I can't say that I'm... impressed with this story, but it's not bad. I had just thought that since this story had 5000 words, that it woul be a lot more smooth and detailed, but you have a very choppy style. You address most of he points. Needed for a story- more than I can say for most people- but you don't make it done amazingly well. This seems really hastily made and like you had to much ground to cover without enough time. I actually liked most all the character traits given very much; I almost never like them in stories. If you could have just transitioned better and wrote cleaner this story would be much better.

I pursued through your profile, and I'd you need a beta I can definitely help you. I make PLENTY of typos, but I never get complaints about my betaing skills (nor my actually capabilities to compose good literature).

Overall a good story that needs a bit of working on. I wish you the best with your skills and good luck!

Honestly,

Grey