Reviews for Dog Star
blb1000 chapter 6 . 3/4
Edward & Alice don't always HAVE to be together right? She & Bella could study while Ed runs to Vermont, or something. ;-)
blb1000 chapter 5 . 3/3
Oh boy!
blb1000 chapter 2 . 3/3
I'm not believing it. The story would be too short! ;-)
blb1000 chapter 1 . 3/3
Hmpf!
Janeway chapter 23 . 12/7/2024
I was going to thank you for such a good, mature story. Maybe a little too ideal and fluffy, with main characters walking on tiptoes as to not commit their cannonical mistakes, but yet very good.
But having read the first paragraph of the last chapter, I just feel like all you've written before was written by a different person. The style is off, that's true, but it's also the story that's completely untrue. Russian mafia (inside Russia) didn't survive after the 90s. Moscow is currently the safest city to walk at night. Really, just try it. Also, you might wanna watch the guy called Sly on youtube - he travels all over the world and this summer he was in Moscow at night. Just watch it.
Moreover, shipping girls in containers is nuts, as there's now way to do that in Moscow - you just have to look at the map to realise there's no big water around. And if you put those containers on the railway, you're gonna face hundreds of check-ups. Just trust me, Russian railways are VERY thorough with their security. And the third point is that no girl in Moscow would succumb to such tricks, anyway, they are too worldly for that. Those girls who used to end up in sexual slavery overseas were from very remote little towns, who saw no opportunities to find meaningful jobs in their native towns, that's why they were willing to try all those absurd schemes.
I know it's like really fashionable to hate Russia. I mean - hate away. Just check your facts first. To make sure you actually hate the things that exist, and don't just spread you fantasies that have no roots in reality
EndlessGloaming chapter 23 . 7/3/2024
I like this story variant and the tensions of created, and it was well executed. I love the idea of a vampire reporter who takes on the most dangerous assignments because none of the humans could possibly be as dangerous as him :)
GirlOnFire30 chapter 23 . 2/8/2024
What a great story! I just love all your work and this is definitely one of my faves. I could never get enough of E&B
birdwoman95 chapter 23 . 2/5/2024
Fantastic AU! The characters matured in a totally believable way, but you still found the way to canon in the end.
Foenix2phorks chapter 23 . 2/2/2024
Loved the premise. It was hard at first reading about Edward with Tanya, but it was worth it in the end! Thank you for the story. :-)
26 chapter 3 . 9/8/2023
WHAT AN AMAZING PREMISE! I didn’t like Bella being paired with anyone except Edward but I can accept Riley because he’s pretty hot and it makes sense.
acw1 chapter 10 . 5/8/2023
:)
readicted chapter 23 . 2/14/2023
Thank you for sharing your story. I really enjoyed it.
Sara chapter 11 . 12/27/2022
Good story. I am reading it second time. But classic was "Come take a walk with me in woods". I mean really it's Edward favourite place to break up. I like your sense of irony here lol
twiclare chapter 23 . 9/22/2022
Great story!
twiclare chapter 22 . 9/22/2022
I like that Edward admitted he wanted to change her.
I hope that Riley finds some peace and happiness.
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