Reviews for Dog Star
dianscot chapter 8 . 5/9
Haha. Emm as Maru Lover...
dianscot chapter 6 . 5/9
Suspense
dianscot chapter 4 . 5/9
Mature E and B... with histories. Love!
dianscot chapter 3 . 5/9
Ooh! Plot twists! Is EC still a virgin? How deep will B fall for Riley?
GirlWhoFlew chapter 8 . 3/18
LOVE IT! At first I wasn't sure how I felt about them seeing other people, but now I'm loving this alternative spin. Bella is more grown up and mature, excited to see where this goes.
jk chapter 2 . 2/19
any story where Edward, a mind reading vampire wants to touch a pussy as used up as Tanya denali's and I'm motherfucking out! who could possibly want Edward after hes been all over the worlds fucking sperm dumpster is beyond me...no I don't think so, how about Edward can have the worlds doorknob and bella can be with ANYONE else.
Guest chapter 10 . 2/6
i like your version better, too
AcetaBells chapter 23 . 2/7
what a great story! love the EdxBella love at the end. great writing, too
Lanigra25 chapter 23 . 10/10/2016
Love love love this story
Ninkita chapter 23 . 9/27/2016
This was a really interesting, really fun read. Thanks!
Ninkita chapter 19 . 9/27/2016
Yes, she's finally worked through it all :)
Ninkita chapter 18 . 9/27/2016
I especially liked the part where they jumped, and then underwater. Lovely.
Ninkita chapter 15 . 9/27/2016
Damn, this is good
Ninkita chapter 13 . 9/27/2016
I think your Victoria is a damn sight more interestingly etched than the original
Ninkita chapter 12 . 9/27/2016
Oh this was so good
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