Reviews for Dog Star
Katelynsharpe95 chapter 23 . 6/15
Such a great story... One of the best I have ever read on this website! Thank you for sharing your talent :)
K chapter 23 . 6/9
Great story. Interesting twist with Riley.
jk chapter 20 . 6/8
oooohhh how nice of Edward to fucking smirk at bella and remind us all that he has eternal stamina...he would know since he spent the last THREE FUCKING YEARS FUCKING TANWHORE!
I'm gonna throw up...then find a new story to read...I hate this could have put him with anyone but you had to put him with the worlds fucking sperm gross
jk chapter 11 . 6/8
So Edward isn't good enough for tanwhore? but you will put bella with him? do you think that is all bella deserves? tanwhores left overs? a BOY that would run from his mate to fuck a whore? over and over again? a boy that would throw his morals away on a used up skank?

your opinion of bella must be VERY VERY LOW...cause I think she deserves better then Edward...Edward has been tainted by a 1000 year old whore. Just think about, would you want a tongue in your mouth that has been inside a pussy that has had thousands of mens sperm in it? I wouldn' wouldn't pass a sucker around to 100 people then put it in your mouth would you? even if you washed it first? NO, you wouldn't!
jk chapter 9 . 6/8
I must have read that wrong...did Edward call tanwhore is LOVELY impervious lover? LOL gross

how does it feel to be last in a very long line of men to be inside tanwhore denali? ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
jk chapter 8 . 6/8
well there it is...story over
Edward just said that bella wasn't particularly note worthy...but Tanya he said she was beautiful..and striking...and the whore just loves his "animal"...
well there it mother fucking is...he can stay with tanwhore...I didn't want bella to have her used up seconds ANYWAY!

jk chapter 7 . 6/8
Edward cant kiss bella...hes tainted with a thousand mens sperm! hes put that tongue inside Tanya denali! EWWWWW...and shiver! so fucking gross!

remember his comment? Tanya loves the animal...omg I fucking threw up in my mouth when I read that! I bet theres NOTHING he hasn't done...and with that nasty skank, god no just fucking NO
jk chapter 4 . 6/8
how am I supposed to want bella with Edward now that we know for fucking sure that hes been licking the stain of a thousands mens ejaculate? How am I going to keep from being FUCKING DISGUSTED when he kisses bella with that mouth? HUH? tell me that? Why couldn't you have him with a vampire that wasn't such a nasty used up fucking WHORE? Someone who wouldn't have TAINTED Edward? Hes not good to me now!
Stories fucking over!
jk chapter 2 . 6/8
I don't get why Edward would fuck that nasty used up whore...fucking nasty.
in what god damned world does bella swan deserve the worlds sperm dumpsters sloppy seconds?
fuck that
I hope you have bella with someone else!
fatpotatoe chapter 20 . 6/3
Wow, Tanya is a saint, I'll tell you that. Edward, too, albeit a tortured saint.
fatpotatoe chapter 19 . 6/3
I understand newborns a lot better now, and the struggle to grow out of it. The original just explained they are wild and volatile. Much better here.
fatpotatoe chapter 6 . 5/29
Beautiful chapter, makes me feel warm and fuzzy.
jk chapter 20 . 3/7
look at Edward all smirky...we never get tired bella we'll need days...
I should know! I spent a fucking year balls deep in the nastiest whore on the planet! I never got tired! smirk smirk...what a fucking creep! I find it sad that there is nothing bella can ever do with Edward sexually that's a first...Tanya was first...his first kiss...first feel up...first one to ride him, shes a whore so he probably had her ass too...Tanya was the first to suck him off...shes been a succubus for 1000 years! there is nothing hes probably not done...and it saddens me
jk chapter 19 . 3/7
that shit about that book? total this story is better then twilight..because its "mature" having Edward Cullen fucking whores is not "mature" its fucking gross, I cant believe that all bella is worth to you...a used up skanky edward
jk chapter 15 . 3/7
sooooo if bella died Edward says he could get over it and move on...but if she leaves with riley he'd never get over it? That doesn't really make much sense to me. If bella is his MATE how does he get over and move on if she dies?
hmmm...guess "mate" doesn't really mean shit in your story huh. I mean he left his "mate" to go fuck a 1000 year old ugly whore and apparently if his "mate" dies then he'll eventually find another hole to fuck.
Edwards kinda a piece of shit and I want bella with riley
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