|Reviews for Dog Star|
| trisha63 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Hey gal, so good to see a new story from you. Okay so this is sounding a whole lot like the real Twilight, but you said to have faith as it will soon depart from regular canon. So I like it so far and will wait patiently while you work your magic and unfold another great masterpiece. Just so you know patience is so not my virtue, but I will promise to be patient, well I will try anyway it's the best I can do. LOL Just out of curiosity, will there be hope that it ends with a HEA? I know that kind of negates the whole patience thing doesn't it? Oh well I am just glad to be reading a new story and cann't wait. Take care, Trisha :}
| Camilla10 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Well, I'll be reading just BECAUSE it is a vamp story, so ...
| Nicffwhisperer chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I love your writing and always have. I love it enough to read a vamp fic, because well, it's you. Great writing, you had my rapt attention. Can't wait to see your story unfold.
| Scorpio11 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Okay, exciting start. I'm looking forward to the 'Not Now' considering how the 'Now' shaped up. Very interesting seeing Edward and Bella's first encounter from Alice's POV and seeing how her visions affected things. I'm guessing Edward won't be back right away.
| TexasTwilight77 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I'm excited to see where this goes. So far, so good. ;)
| sfspeedy chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
on board for this one! THAnk you!
| RubeySlippers chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Sounds very interesting - looking forward to future chapters :)
| andralea chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
It's a great start! I really like the "background" info that we didn't get in the original stories. Can't wait to see where this goes... :)
| Dulcinea21bella chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I am already intrigued!
| Lurecyka chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I really like that first chapter and very happy for this new story !
| JulieToo chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I really enjoyed the description of how Alice views her visions. Like lots of other reviewers, I've wondered why she didn't become more involved in the initial meeting of Edward and Bella. I like the manhandling of Edward out the doors at vampire speed too, so the human students don't know what's going on. And now just Bella and Rosalie at school...does that get a mention in chapters to come?
Thanks for the new story and something to look forward to in the weeks/months to come!
| jilburfm chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
FUN! An AU story! I have a soft spot for AUs.
I absolutely loved when her hair got stuck in her mouth and she had to fish it out when she was trying to act cool. Best.
| dreampills chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
great first chapter. can't wait to read more.
| KatHat chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Can not believe it's been five years since I've been reading 'Faking It'! Dear Lord!
This is amazing. What a spectacular twist of perspectives for you to show us how that first day went down from Alice's POV and to describe her visions as snapshots, pieces of a puzzle and faded polaroids. I had always wondered why Alice didn't see Edward's struggle and do something to intervene. It makes more sense that they were ready to spring into action right outside the door and grabbed him to spirit him away. What an magnificent show of sibling support to be there for him!
Your explanation with the broken thermostat in Mr. Banner's room and the hot room makes having a fan in there make so much more sense, than just having it there for no apparent reason!
One thing I always wondered was, why didn't he get any kind of whiff of her crazy scent in the lunchroom when he walked by, kwim?
Alice observing his struggle a near break down was so much more realistic than anything SM described. I know, blasphemy, right? And Jasper running tactics and angles, excellent!
Such a good start, lady!
| sherryola chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Oh, I'm fascinated to see where you take this. i like how you did this from alice's view, with all the visions and everything. It was powerful and had me on the edge of my seat, since i didn't know what thing you would be changing. very nice and i'm really looking forward to this.