Reviews for Dog Star
mimi53 chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
Alice's point of view and now edward considering a future with Tanya...curiouser and curiouser!
Julia-S77 chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
I am so hoping you are still sending Edward home! I always feel sorry for Tanya being second best all the time.

Can't wait for the next update. Great chapter, loved it xx
insanemum chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
Hell yeah! I always wondered why Edward and Tanya never got together - not even once? I mean - a man is not a camel for god's sake!
insanemum chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Haha *claps hands* I adore vamp - bring it! :)
Nicffwhisperer chapter 2 . 5/12/2012
. :(
Charlie0925 chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
Oh nooooo! LOL

I'm loving the start of this and cannot wait for more! ;o)
mommymac0508 chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
NO Edward stop don't do it she is not the one what will happen will he stop before its too late update soon
tff000 chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
wondering how far he will get with tanya - how long he will try to stay with her
TessLouise chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
*inner mantra*
DutchGirl01 chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
Amazing chapter, didn't see that one coming. Great job!
beckaboo924 chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
I forgot to mention last chapter that I appreciated your way of describing Alice's visions! I'm a photographer and it really helped me visualize.

So I've read different pairings with Bella but never with Edward. This is very interesting! Excited for more.
risk11111 chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
Such an amazing, beautiful chapter. I particularly loved Edward's inner thoughts as he debated the merits of "enough" love. It's a question that resonates within the human mind, i think, and not just on the topic of romance. When do we continue to persue? When do we give up the chase, stop, and turn back, determined to make ourselves content? And you portrayed that precipice of choice with a really glistening sense of suspense.
emmjaebee chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
Beautiful writing, you can really feel what the characters are feeling. This Tanya seems more in keeping with canon than most. We seem to forget that SM's Tanya is based on Bella's perceptions. And, just as Bella doesn't see herself clearly, maybe her perceptions about Tanya are somewhat skewed. That said I am a big Bella and Edward fan. And, I love this Edward - he just seems more human. I can't wait to see how his flexibility plays out when he and Bella meet again.
majose chapter 2 . 5/11/2012
well, I have to say this alternative scenery makes sense. Cannot wait to see what happens next. I am curious about the title though...
beckaboo924 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
It's been awhile since I've read a good vamp fic!
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