|Reviews for Dog Star|
| Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 23 . 10/30/2015
Loved it. I'm recommending it to my friends who loved Twilight but not the way the following boos were written. Thank you for seeing it through. I really liked this Bella too.
| Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 22 . 10/30/2015
Geary eyes here. :) so happy Bella kept on until he let go of any worry or guilt.
| Montara chapter 23 . 10/30/2015
Glad Riley came back! And it seems he's with Tanya :)))
ExB will go back to the family. Bet Alice will be the happiest while Rose will try to tolerate them...or maybe she'll give Bella a chance.
Thank you for sharing your story! :)
| Montara chapter 22 . 10/30/2015
Riley run away :( Poor guy : Hope he'll find his way back!
Edward finally found peace...
| Montara chapter 21 . 10/30/2015
Victoria is dead. I wonder what would have been her life if Carlisle would have been her maker or the one presenting her this new life?
Now they are free!
| Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 14 . 10/30/2015
This has been an excellent chapter. Really scary different from what I expected.
| Montara chapter 20 . 10/30/2015
They really need to be alone :))
Rosalie was right that they put Bella in danger by befriending her but who would have guessed a vampire will try something like this?!
They are still in danger though, Victoria is still out there!
| Montara chapter 19 . 10/30/2015
I feel so sorry for Riley :( Collateral damage but still, he's now a vampire who killed a human : And it could have been Bella!
I'm so happy for Bella's decision :)))
I wonder what was the scene you wanted in this chapter but you removed? Will you post it as an outtake?!
| Montara chapter 18 . 10/30/2015
He was right to stop it but that was intense :)
| Montara chapter 17 . 10/30/2015
Poor Bella, doesn't know what her real feelings are. And poor Charlie and Renee, no matter what, they lost their daughter :(((
I think Bella can make a real decision after her newborn stage is over...
| Montara chapter 16 . 10/30/2015
She's a normal newborn! I like it! :)
| Montara chapter 15 . 10/30/2015
So, this was Victoria's plan. Very smart but Bella loves Edward...Riley will have to find someone else!
| Montara chapter 14 . 10/30/2015
I'm so sorry for Gisela. RIP :(
I wonder why Victoria bitten Riley too? And, Bella was meant to die or her transformation was in Victoria's plan?!
| Montara chapter 13 . 10/30/2015
He should have followed her : But, can't help it...THEY KISSED! :))))
| Montara chapter 12 . 10/30/2015
I think she should let Riley go, especially when she has this sort of thoughts.