Reviews for Hetalia Mary Sue Test
KiaraWangWilliams chapter 1 . 3/17
My OC Kiara Wang Williams, daughter of Canada and China, got 21 points.
Yami Sonozaki chapter 1 . 2/14
Okay, I just read your test to see if it was a good test, and let me tell you this: you really don't know what a Mary-Sue character is. Yes, no one is perfect, but there is no such thing as an inhumanly imperfect person either. A character can be extremely beautiful and still have flaws in their personality. Something in this test that really bothers me is the questions about the names. The creator has the right to name their character ANY way they want to, even if it's after themselves as long as the name is from the country the OC is based off of. The name meaning shouldn't count for a Mary-Sue quality. The name can have any meaning the creator wants it to be. Also, just because the creator wants to name their future child that name DOES NOT mean that the name is a Mary-Sue's name. It should be perfectly fine if an OC is uncomfortable with nudity because not every single person in those specific areas are going to be comfortable with nudity. A thing I saw in your test is that a lot of the things seem to be based off of stereotypes. Hetalia isn't all about stereotypes, so it doesn't matter if an OC isn't based off of stereotypes. Also, not every single bust size or height or whatever is going to be according to the country's average. Sure, the bust size should not be bigger than Ukraine's, but not everything is going to be proportional to averages. Also, some of the nations have violet eyes and Romania has red eyes. those colors should be okay for an OC.
There are some good things about your test though. You're right that there should be some historical accuracy with OCs. Countries that are historical enemies with the OCs shouldn't be paired with them or be friends with them. Anyways, I hope you aren't offended with me for critiquing your test. I hope that I could have helped you in some way too. Your test was okay for the most part.
Yami Sonozaki
Roma chapter 1 . 5/16/2016
Oi Only got 5, But my character IS very interesting .
Erin chapter 1 . 11/29/2015
Well my only 2 were the scar one that was heavily noticed. still working on it
LizLiz chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Yay! My OC got 18! Last time I tested her she only got 13, but I've been doing more research recently. I'm glad the score's good, because I've been working on her for almost a year now.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/27/2015

My OC's the Internet.

And I've got practically nothing.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/1/2015

...I don't even know how this is possible.
wow chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
13... im ashamed ... a lot
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
My third review of my Oc CJ... She is definitely a Mary Sue. She will no longer have powers period just the abilities of a normal human, and will only interact with the countries as one of their World conference maids.
Lizzie chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
I realized a few things while taking this test...
1. I don't have any actual Hetalia OCs other than the commonly shared fanon characters (example; Native America. She's kind of the same everywhere she's portrayed...).
2. The risk of making mary sues is why I don't make Hetalia OCs.
3. My image of Native America is quite bland... I scored a -19.
4. I'm gonna stick with my plan and not make any future Hetalia OCs.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2015
Several months ago I posted a review of my oc CJ. Turns out she seems very Mary Sueish so i made some changes. I removed most of her powers, instead giving her spring based abilities. I also changed her color scheme to aqua and light green, since purple is a commonly used color for Mary Sues. She still does not represent a country/state/province whatever the characters are in Hetalia. She shows romantic interests in men and even goes on dates with different people. She tend to have a potty mouth and lazy attitude, which leads her to be punished by her mother. Real punishment, not the overused child abuse stuff. The fanfic is still going to be a multi crossover, but I'm making sure that all my characters-canon and original/owned- are researched and written well. The only Hetalia character she actually interacts with would be Seychelles.
Kaibird chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Saskatchewan got -22
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
From a crossover story currently in the process of brainstorming:
My OC, CJ, does not represent any type of country, nation, colony, city or whatever she is just a normal magical girl character who's friends with personified countries. She is seventeen years old from a middle class family and resides in North does flirt with her at first but instead of being disgusted she finds him amusing. CJ doesn't sleep with anybody(she's a virgin), and I don't put rape in any of my stories because its too sensitive a subject for me and any other people. She's smart but she sucks at math, and since this is an oc from a magical girl story i wrote from a long time ago she has energy powers and some fighting ability but not flight nor super strength. CJ becomes friends with Belgium, North Italy, and Hungary after being sent to WorldAcademy by accident. She tends to be very lazy but she was raised too well to be mean- spirited although she and her younger sister argues over trivial stuff. Currently CJ is in no romantic relationship, though she has shown some interest in Britain, South Italy, Tintin , and Zak Saturday (crossover of Tintin Secret Saturdays Hetalia GenRex Ben 10 Danny Phantom and Human!The Railway Series/ Thomas and Friends) Cj gets along with the boys and doesn't fangirl over them. She wears makeup to cover her facial acne, which certainly shows when you're African American she is on a balanced diet and exercise plan to better her mind body and soul. Her magical girl outfit consists of indigo pants, indigo turtleneck blouse with an aquamarine gem in the middle, one black and one gold bracelets on her left wrist, and dark violet calf length boots. Her violet headband has an aquamarine gem the shape of the Earth planetary symbol. CJ does not like Russia because she knows his evil ways, and she tries to prevent America from screwing the US even further.
Uncoordinated Redhead chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
When I got to the part about "married to a cannon character," I imagined myself hauling an actual cannon (as in the large gun) down the aisle. Couldn't quit laughing at that mental image.
LeDragonBunny chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
My OC, Tahiti, got 17; I expected him to score higher. You put into consideration: exotic beauty, charm, skill in the arts...
My friend's, Siberia, got a 58!
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