Reviews for Never Forgotten
kiki-chan3410 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
this story is like reading a fairytail book! it was beautiful and heartwarming.
Pudding Babies chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
Hey this has the exact same plot to a yaoi manga that I read it's one of my favourites. I'm not accusing you of anything but it's strikingly similar, like the exact same but just different characters. If you did do this intentionally, please be reminded that you're ripping the orinal author off of her work and stealing her idea and using it as your own. If you read the manga but forgot about it then you can read it here , however if you didn't intend to take her story and plagiarism, than please put a disclaimer of the plot as it is not yours. The gift of sugar cube and the last sentence "Until the day they were called to heaven." Is the exact same.
Thanks for your time.
-FAOC
Cindy M 19 chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Very cute, i love the story, it is simple and original, I think since I didn't read a story like this.
Daichilover chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Wow, that was definitely cute. Although you could've made this into a chapter story, I think you did well telling it like a fairy-tale. It felt like someone was reading me a bed-time story, which was very nice.

Anyway, I loved your idea of Kagome being the only one ever really loved him. I think that was always true in the show. Keep writing!

Daichilover
Hmmmmm chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
I've read this on here before.
Icefire BlackMoon chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
:') Awwwww so sweet! I love this story!
Leaf chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
beautiful. just beautiful.
Demon of the Sacred Moon chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Didnt you get this from a manga?
xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXx chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
Aaargh! That was so adorable, I don't even know what to say! The s-s-s-s-sugar cubes...the little pretty sugar cubes...such a cute connection! This was absolutely perfect!
InuKag4evertogether chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
that was... breathtaking. absolutly luved it!
Hikaru-chan chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I really enjoyed this story. You did grasp the fairy tale essence to it, it's like one good friend told me one day "simplicity can sometimes be the right approach", or something around those lines ;)

Very beautiful. I especially love how the story has an object which is directly yet indirectly related to the plot: sugar cubes. Very clever. Plus how in the end there is that little hint of "lesson learned" as if the story is actually teaching something. Contributing to that fairy tale approach. Good job!

Loved it!
InuyashasGrl26 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
It's really unique for sure.
SailorKagome chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Such a beautiful and heartwarming story ! It's been a long time since I've last encountered a story like this. It's simply brilliant.
AdorableLittleWriter chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Hello.

Your story is very very cute, and the angle of its approach is very unique, with making Inuyasha the king and Kagome a concubine. It it very well-written and has a certain ring to that makes it sound royal to me (i dunno, feels that way). It indeed sounds like a fairytale passed from one person to another.

I cannot find much wrong with this story, but perhaps the characters are slightly OOC. but if you have made them that way, I apologise.

That's all, and I hope you write more!
TheRealInuyasha chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
It was a nice story. *a small smile appears* It's okay Inuyasha. You are not the first nor will you be the last to lose yourself in power and wealth. Good job, ja!
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