|Reviews for Dreamscapes|
| JacobsMistress chapter 1 . 3/15
Ohhh that was awesome, your writing is amazing, CNT wait to read more!
| applebabyblue chapter 43 . 2/23
| Guest chapter 43 . 2/16
Love it! Great story! It's one my Bella/ Jake favorites.
| Frosty Freeze chapter 21 . 11/1/2013
This is one of the few Twilight/Post Eclipse Stories that actually feels "right". The characters remain true to themselves but are better fleshed out. They take a little time to think about the long term consequences of their decisions both to themselves and others. I mean yes Bella fights her love for Jacob to the very end. Then with a some straight talk from a stand-up, no bullshit kind of gal like Leah she starts to get a clue. I was blown away with Leah's description of what sex with Edward was going to be like ("stick a Popsicle up there") and that marrying him is tantamount to suicide. I will NEVER understand why S. Meyers tried to convince her readers that sex with Edward would be anything but a creepy, gross & frightening experience - especially for a young girl like Bella with no real understanding of sex beyond tab a goes in slot b . I understand that he is "dreamy" to gaze upon, but the reality of having sex with an ice cube is not something most women would melt over. Meyers made it sound like it would have been the be all and end all . Then again she's a Mormon so it might just be. Anyway, this is head & shoulders above most of the other twilight based stories out there including the original books. You have done a great job. -
| Creature-feature chapter 11 . 11/1/2013
Isnt it great how Bella rationalizes how throwing Jacob under the bus is a great idea and good for him. I mean after all Bella is so selfless and caring. What a coward she is. Sure, being dead forever is a great way to spare yourself lifes little ups and downs. See its all about looking good and having some good looking arm candy. Forget about life and love and laughte. Long as you get to spend forever looking your best the rest is just details.r And if you have to destroy a few other lives on the way so what. They'll get over it. If they dont its not her problem. I wish one of you writers would actually write Bella as a human being instead of the selfish, uncaring self deceiving fool Meyers does. Let Bella really understand what she is giving up. Stop spouting this "I cant live with out my sparklyboy". Stop the Edward can do no wrong crap. It did not make sense in the book and makes no more sense in your story.
| redbella chapter 43 . 10/5/2013
Wow... Just wow
I loved this story, you have the most sinister Edward, the most touching engagement and the most steamiest sex that I've read. My god woman why aren't you published.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
| crrlmoore chapter 43 . 9/24/2013
This was such an amazingly beautiful story! And man Jake and Bella's sex life was super hot. Great job!
| Whitlock.Mason.McCarty.Cullen chapter 43 . 8/16/2013
This story was fantastic! I absolutely love it! Fabulous job! Really! :) it was really excellent! So VERY well written. The twists and anxst were thrilling! This plot was totally original and I loved it! Great job!
| multireader99 chapter 7 . 8/7/2013
Awesome story this is like my seventh time reading this and u haven't gotten tired of it
| Guest chapter 29 . 4/18/2013
"Will the other party consider the treaty void if he refers to them as "goddamn fucking bloodsuckers" in the text?"
OMG, I cackled like a mental patient.
| Guest chapter 43 . 4/10/2013
Zoe that story was fab can we please have a film of that summit?
| PastOneonta chapter 43 . 3/31/2013
Oh thank you so much for this story. It is wonderful writing and creativity and a happy Jacob and Bella ending. There is so much to this story, so much development for each character and so much action. What more could a reader want? I have to go to JBNP for the alternate and on to your sequel: Revelations. Thanks for writing.
| PastOneonta chapter 42 . 3/31/2013
Great action! Did not anticipate the use of Bree at all. Very clever. Though I think I started out with tears at the beginning of this chapter due to the contents and discussion of Jacob's box of Bella memories. Your detail in writing is so good, you even give consideration to Bella's thoughts as to whether she should share Jacob's souvenirs with others. The decision making regarding the pack is thorough and interesting too.
| PastOneonta chapter 41 . 3/31/2013
Oh how perfect. In spite of the fight about to happen there is time for love and sweetness. Billy is perfect thinking about his son's commitment to destiny and his youth and also in reassuring Bella. Jake and Bella's visit to pack families is perfect, what a wonderful and meaningful thing to do on the eve of battle (and how creative on your part). Rachel trying to do the right thing for Paul without losing herself is tough but perfect. Bonfire on the beach flattering all the boys was perfectly fun.
| PastOneonta chapter 40 . 3/30/2013
Another great chapter. From the beginning, Jake and Bella waking up together, Rachel trying to teach Paul respect, Bella and Rachel talking about the responsibilities of being imprinted and having someone's future in your hands, Seth healing, and the revelation of the first great Spirit Warrior since Taha Aki. Charlie and Jake have a plan. How can they protect Bella?