|Reviews for Sparrow|
| topsilog00 chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
The POV is interesting but there are quite a few typos. These include run on sentences and the past/ present forms of verbs that contradict. You could edit this story into something much better!
| tigrun chapter 21 . 3/12/2013
love the awesome story please continue
| Anonymous chapter 21 . 3/3/2013
WOW XD lol Dick should be glad to at least see some videos from Ann's childhood U
OMFG X3 Ann and Jai are just... TOO CUTE 3 please get them together soon!:D
| Analadybug chapter 21 . 2/14/2013
I love it. It is really good. Please keep writing
| Analadybug chapter 20 . 2/10/2013
I love it,please make another...
| Month4 chapter 20 . 1/29/2013
This is a good chapter. Maybe Barbra can show Dick a video of what he missed in Ann's life.
| snyderk161 chapter 18 . 12/26/2012
please write more
| snyderk161 chapter 16 . 10/26/2012
please write and post more
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/27/2012
The only problem I have with this story is annoying run on sentences with no punctuation whatsoever.
| I'm Not A Princess chapter 11 . 7/24/2012
Really good story! update soon? (:
| Month4 chapter 3 . 5/28/2012
I am liking this story.
How about a boy comes into the story and it turns out that he's the son of Tarantula. From when she had sex with him after the death of Blockbuster. That could spice things up a bit.
Just a thought though.
| Anna chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Great story love it keep uploading more chapters