|Reviews for Coffee And Chocolate|
| Sinceslicedbread chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
This was brilliant. This is worthy of being on screen.
Scriptwriters take note, this is how Jixie should be portrayed.
I loved their childish banter, especially when Dixie licked the entire choccie bar, in an attempt to put Jeff off. No such luck.
These two deserve more screen time.
You write them so well. :D
| Woody2792 chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Lovely one-shot :)
loved seeing Jeff's thoughts, his thinking process, everything :D
Grammar/spelling/sentence structure was a little off at points, but it was a thoroughly readable story, and you should be proud of yourself :)
| ameliasredhair chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
omg I laughed so much hahahah! This is so like them well done xx
| Trying to Understand chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Awww... that was sweet and I thought you did the chocolate scene justice! I liked Charlie saying 'there will be no funny business in this ED' when they were just fighting over chocolate! Just one mistake I noticed was draw should be drawer but overall it was excellent!
| Gillian Kearney Fan chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
That was really good.