Reviews for Fries and Jealousy
Chili99 chapter 2 . 5/1/2013
That was sooo funny! With all the speech us think it Wud b boring bt it was soo good!
Misschampcc chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Completely random but fun at the same time.
Please update soon:-)
The One You Never Suspected chapter 2 . 2/13/2013
Haha oh this was funny!
Lily Scott chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
need more kissing
anonomous chapter 1 . 9/23/2012
Lol.
Elixabeth chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Hahahahahahahahaha I love it! Hahaha I think you should make this like a book :) well not a book but like a fanfic with chapters and stuff! Like... Enlongate it... (I think thats a word lol) anyways LOVE IT!
HEY ITS ME chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
SO I WAS LOKKING THROUGH HS FANFICTION AND I FIND U WOW SMALL WORLD
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P.S FUNNY
Eri Hunters- Goddess of Minds chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
STOP STEALING HIS FRIES! LOL
travelingwishes chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I loved your summary! it made me laugh so hard! This is definitely a favorite!
The One You Never Suspected chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Funny! I liked it!

Kylie
DeviousDragons chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
This was funny, but I spotted some mistakes.

"Hale what does this have to do with the heist?" should be "Hale, what does this have to do with the heist?"

"Simons" should be "Simon's".

"'Well, it doesn't exactly have to do with the heist, it's just…Kat and Nick are having a lunch date and I just want to make sure she's okay.' Was all Hale would say before he looked over at the couple." should be "'Well, it doesn't exactly have to do with the heist, it's just…Kat and Nick are having a lunch date and I just want to make sure she's okay,' was all Hale would say before he looked over at the couple."

"'Hale where are you going?'" should be "'Hale, where are you going?"

"Yeah, and will you people stop stealing my fries!" should be "Yeah. And will you people stop stealing my fries?"

Other than those mistakes, good job! :)