|Reviews for Undisturbed|
| lightinthenight chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Whoa. Very intriguing. Your use of language and imagery is absolutely phenomenal, as is the very last line. No criticisms!
| Countess Millarca chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
It was an interesting portray of their relationship. If the manga had given a more thorough description of their meeting and time together, I imagine it would be something like this. However, I liked your version better than the manga's, where he dies before her and she with her child are shunned by everyone afterwards. Well written:)
| KiwiWitch chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Wow, just wow. Is this going to continue? Because so far it's great and I'd love to see more but it seems like a one-shot.
Anyway, this is great!