Reviews for Caught In A Crossfire
anon chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Omg will you punctuate your sentences properly? Haven't you heard of using the period button?! This story doesn't make sense if you don't take the time to proofread and fix errors. Lazy and sloppy.
Li'lDixonDarlin chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
This was so cute! Lenora reminds me of a friend of mine's ex girlfriend XD
MyNamesInvalid chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Aw! This was such a cute story! :)
Jupiter Moriarty chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Aww Yeah I am glad gthey made up; they make a cute couple. I love how Jake had to get involved, but at least he showed he cared that they where happy with each other then trying to hit on her