Reviews for Honor To Serve
Wolfman-053 chapter 19 . 4/17
How could Riddle be charged with Perjury, when, AFAIK, he has never been brought to trial for anything?
Loresign chapter 7 . 12/25/2020
Love the way you did the nominations. I did expect some “bitching” about the Queen being in charge of the Wizard’s World. Other writers have put forth the complaint at a muggle queen had no right to dictate to magical. This is a refreshing change.
Loresign chapter 6 . 12/25/2020
I’m majorly impressed by giving the Dursleys an actual reason not liking Harry. It’s even a good reason that most would understand. Granted it was taken too far, but it is still understandable. I don’t think anyone has ever given a reason for the Dursleys for hating magic beside just plain jealousy.

I love the part of Dumbledore finding the old garden plans done both Lily and Petunia,and making it a reality. Nice idea, and I don’t thinks ever been done before either.

Thank you for sharing your time with this story.
Millie072 chapter 4 . 11/16/2020
Draco was not "redeemed". At 14 he had yet to take the ark. The DE rituals had not been forced on yet, so no deaths, no rapes, no torture. Of his own free will, Draco witnessed against his father, Lord Voldemort, and the DEs. So no redemption, rather remorse. In fact, who has been redeemed? Vernon, no, Petunia only partially. Dudley, yes. So, one person currently. It's very interesting to watch the royals interact so personally with the Wizengamot. How many of them in this AU are witch and wizard? Intriguing story.
Fairer010 chapter 21 . 11/6/2020
A good story from a good waiter
Charlee56 chapter 21 . 10/30/2020
Dr Pulaski, the Monkees, Lee Jordan turning into Bullwi kle J Moose pulling a "Rockie" out of his hat... So many great Easter Eggs in this story. Great stuff!
Charlee56 chapter 17 . 10/30/2020
Inaprovaline: a synaptic and cardio-stimulant, as per Memory
Didja think nobody would catch the Star Trek Easter Egg?!
And you desperately need an editor. Find a Beta. Depending on SpellCheck for your editing just ain't gonna do it!
Charlee56 chapter 5 . 10/28/2020
You're inventing a whole new universe here. And in humanising the Dursleys, you've given hope to this universe. It's even rubbing off on Draco and Pansy!
ellemir1 chapter 11 . 10/14/2020
I am really enjoying this.
I am a little confused. Last chapter I thought Pansy fought her father at Windsor. This chapter implies he is still in st Mungos after being cursed by Lucius.
Am I missing something?
Fire Tempest chapter 21 . 10/1/2020
Impressive. I don't think I've seen a fic that looks at redeeming Dursley parents and Harry's relationships so late in the day before. I found it effective - though uncomfortable. I acknowledge that this is the healthiest outcome, but it grates that they are not properly punished for their abuse - even with your clear demonstration of the difficulty of change.

Thank you for an excellent story.
Fallow57 chapter 21 . 8/31/2020
red-jacobson chapter 21 . 8/15/2020
Enjoyable story, although it seemed like a chapter was missing between 17 and 18. What happened after Augusta rose to give the report about the Potions NEWTs?

I do hope you have plans for a sequel, at least to tie up the loose ends, showing how Harry and the others deal with a normal year, Petunia's baby, who Harry ends up dating long term, (I'd love to see him and Luna go out at least once)

Also, I'm a bit confused. At one point, Percy thinks about his assistant Penelope, with the implication that it's Penelope Clearwater, and then later you have Dumbledore say that Penelope didn't get hired and it caused a breakup between Percy and Penny. Can you clarify?

I'll keep your page open, but I need to get back to my own writing. See you next time

diabolicArbitor chapter 21 . 8/10/2020
This story, as well as the prequel are/was excellent. I loved the way you turned the Dursleys around and the way you permanently dealt with ol' Tommy-boy.
Jimbocous chapter 21 . 4/24/2020
Finally got off my dead butt and did a full top to bottom read of all three stories. Nicely written, and overall a really great read! Thanks!
Guest chapter 9 . 3/28/2020
I'm trying to work out what precedence you are using in your story. I was puzzled that the monarch made Draco a Baron for the single act of reporting his father's crimes, and harry a mere knight for defeating the dark lord three times thus making Draco the superior in precedence. In this chapter you seem to indicate the opposite by saying comments would be in reverse order of seniority and Draco went first. I feel Draco didn't deserve such a high honour and harry deserved a lot better. I presume you wanted to give draco the chance to use another surname so you could have made harry an earl or something so that he would take precedence (see wikipedia on british order of precedence).
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