Reviews for Constant Bearing, Decreasing Range
kmfroggi chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
watching someone else out the window, HOT! kinky is right! can i join your facebook? how do i find you. cannot wait for the teaser, i wait for this story every morning, its like i need it before i go to work! haha
tennishog chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
Ahhhhhhh! So good!
carebear309 chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
Well I was proud of b for a bit there. She was giving it to him good but then couldn't say no. I'm still not convinced on e yet. I guess now I have my answer on who becomes here attached one since b can't refuse him.
zkcej chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
And I can't wait to read the next kinky update teeeheee beahahahah


Thanks for the hotness
Love M Go Blue chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
"'My life isn't here, Bella.'"

Hmmm . . . then, where IS his "other" life? WHAT is his other life? Oh! Just had a terrible thought. He could, as much as we'd all hate him to, have a family elsewhere: a wife, kids. It's unlikely, I get that, cuz you'd think that they might, at some point during the season, visit him, and then someone in Clallum might see them. But really . . . who would honestly know?

"'Let's talk and see if we can figure something out, okay?'"

Yeah. Guess that didn't exactly work out, did it? LOL

"Edward told me he keeps the same apartment year round so that he can store things here. I wonder as I look around the room, how he manages that. Mrs. Cope doesn't like vacant apartments. "

Well, duh, Bella. Mrs Cope likely doesn't like empty apartments because she's not making any money if they're empty. But my first thought was that Edward probably pays for the apartment year-round; my thoughts didn't go where hers did - that it was somehow an illicit arrangement. Silly girl; just can't think straight.

I have a feeling that, despite the fact that there was a bed right next to them the whole time they just had sex, and now despite the fact that they're IN a bed - yeah, I have a feeling that Edward doesn't have sex in beds. Not sure why I get that feeling - maybe because missionary sex in a bed is (usually) too much like "making love" instead of just "f**king". I was honestly surprised that Edward even asked her to stay & sleep there, frankly. (And I was just as surprised that Bella didn't have similar thoughts about the bed as she did about the sofa & side chair. LOL)
rcherry1977 chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
Oh good gravy, was that kinky! I never did that type of stuff in college... I guess I was boring! lol! And she did all that sober! lol! Love your story and thanks for the update!
Insert Fangs Here chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
omg! your killing me, so awesome
ReluctantRomantic chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
Nice job with the super hot, kinky lemon! Glad to see I'm not the only one who's a little...twisted. This chapter was deliciously so.

Really enjoying this story. Thank you!
missveritys chapter 5 . 5/11/2012
I love your Alice. You always do a good Alice x
Guest chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
She decides he's not a good guy and is concerned about who all he's fucked in his apartment, but she still fucks him? Talk about being self destructive. We all know that some major drama is coming, but Bella's asking for it. She knows better but has no self control. This is just sad.
Mrs. Cullen chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
Can we please cut down on the author's notes? Honestly, Edward doesn't seem like a great guy and Bella has low self esteem. It's your story to write and I'm sure I'll enjoy it, but I'd prefer to not be told how to interpret each chapter and character. It's unnecessary.
Lizzie Sparkling chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
You're soooo in trouble...okay you said kinky..but I'm at work right now and all I wanna do is find a window and an Edward!Hot...
PCCTwiFF23 chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
For all intents and purposes, if Bella's heart would agree with her head, this would be the perfect fuck buddy situation. Bella's had her string of one nighters and I'm sure she's had fuck buddies but we all know where this is headed and why we're so concerned about her. And I wonder if Edward is the least bit curious about Bella's past? Other than marking his "territory" and saying he doesn't want to share, is he the least bit curious as to how dirty our girl can be? Fucking in the same room, hell next to another couple probably led to more than just that-she did say more than one set of hands, eh? An she's experienced thinking it would be kinda interesting if Bella & Alice fooled around on the regular while the men are away. *waggles eyebrows* Anyway, the point is I hope Edward starts to outwardly show Bella he's interested in her for more than just fucking. We know he can't commit but I hope he at least wants to hold conversations with her. I know, I know, you say he's not that bad of a guy...ok, you said he's not a bad guy... I'm just holding my fists up to my tightly-closed eyes waiting for the real angst to begin...because I know YOU can, and always do, bring it!
padalf1025 chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
Man I'm afraid he's going to break her heart! That was intense HOT!
Scattycow chapter 6 . 5/11/2012
As hot as that was, i had this horrible feeling that Jasper and Edward planned the whole voyeur thing, that they do it all the time! That's just awful so I hope I'm wrong. Am I the only person that finds the whole ' spunking over face, tits, arse' thing pretty disrespectful. It's so porno! Probably! I promise you Beegurl I 'm not a prude! LOL! I wouldn't be reading these stories if I were. I'm just big on respect and at the moment I don't see a lot going on here!
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