Reviews for Secrets
Sri Naryan Mines chapter 11 . 10/28/2015
J,C.B Parmision
Nella Moonblood Royalle chapter 1 . 2/17/2015
Coooo coooollllll X)
egefried chapter 17 . 2/15/2015
Epic ending must recommend to all my friends and that last part was like PFFFFFFTTTTTT lol black Allen hehehe xD
XavierForest chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
Poor Kanda
Moyashi130 chapter 17 . 11/21/2014
That was the most adorable Yullen/Vampire fanfic ever! :D Loved It!
Unicorn chapter 5 . 8/28/2014
*rainbows shoot out of eyes and shrieks* IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL
Guest chapter 17 . 4/10/2014
I so freaking like it & love it. Make a sequel.
NOMNOMBUNNYWILLEATYOURSOUL chapter 17 . 3/20/2014
Hehehe *-*
LadyAliceWalker chapter 17 . 8/3/2013
Awwwwwww I loved it! Thank you for this wonderful story! (and the song was beautiful by the way ;)
MaxAngelOfDeath chapter 9 . 7/17/2013
LENALEE YOU BITCH! YOU DAMN SELFISH BITCH! YOU THINK YOU ARE THE QUEEN AND YOU SHOULD DIE!
Semper Tardius chapter 17 . 6/14/2013
This was so adorable and sweet! I love how the original plots are incorporated in the story. And it has a happy ending (love happy endings). I thought it was pretty cool how Allen was on good terms with the Noah family as well; Tyki's affection was especially humorous around Kanda
BLEACHLOVER101 chapter 17 . 3/28/2013
Hehe, I liked it! However, you had lots of spelling and grammar mistakes throughout the piece :
PoisonousDemon chapter 17 . 2/24/2013
thank you for writing this story it was really good.
Valkyrie Ampora chapter 17 . 1/26/2013
i loved it!
X Miyuki-chan X chapter 17 . 12/21/2012
I loved it, and it was a phenomenal story, but there were some incorrect and missing letters in words and some awry grammar every now and then.

There were a few times when it seemed to contradict itself though, such as when Kanda was told Allen was dead. The bond they made was such that if the one died the other went with them, so Allen could not be dead because Kanda was still there, alive, gut feeling beside. Another instance is how they call each other on the phone, can't they talk to each other in their heads with the bond or is there a distance limit? They also keep talking about how Japan is dangerous for hunters, but Allen and Kanda are also vampires so it should be safer for them. The fact they both have hunter weapons is a factor of danger, but they do blend at least more than Lavi or Deidara do.

I loved your story, but those were a few points I felt I should bring up.
Good Work! Keep writing!

Happy Holidays,
Miyuki
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