Reviews for What if
AliceSunshine chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Great job! That was definately my favorite part in Primacy!
Starfishyeti chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Well done.

Despite the errors (and there are less than some English-mother-tongue writers!), it's an enjoyable story.
Ms.GrahamCracker chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
The English mistakes were easy to overlook - you wrote Charlie's feelings very well and we all felt his fear for Amita. Welcome to Numb3rs and thanks for this scene from one of my favorite episodes.
notsing chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Sweet little story expanding on a good episode. Thanks for posting, and welcome to Numb3rs.
PattyB chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Even though there were some errors I thoroughly enjoyed it because it helped me recreate Primacy in my mind. I haven't seen the episode is quite some time.

You did good. Keep writing. I wish I were as proficient in another language as you are.