Reviews for Shakugan no Shana A Different Story
black raven 0875 chapter 10 . 1/2
Nice story
Like how shana is still even though she is not flat chested
Like how the story is going so far can not wait until the next chapter
Khaos chapter 10 . 12/1/2014
This story really needs to be updated and completed I've been using this site for reading for thirteen plus years and I've read plenty of great stories and this one ranks up there with some of the best I've ever read so please I hope your twin or you decide to complete this story and if you would like some advice or a beta mention my muse Khaos in the authors note you can even bash me if you want I'll be watching for an update thank you very much
Lightning0491 chapter 10 . 8/1/2014
Please update this is an amazing story
111none chapter 10 . 2/26/2014
I haven't written enough to be a beta, but if you want me to check your English I can. (I don't know Japaneese, I've never seen this anime before either.) Pm me if your interested.

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111none chapter 5 . 2/26/2014
Well, certainly a lot of breaking the fourth wall in this chapter.
Fantasy-Magician chapter 10 . 2/1/2014
Is this fic dead?
I really love this story :_; it's a really good twist.
This section is almost dead so I wish there's more good fic And unfortunately my hands full so I can't add more story of mine :_; huuuu 'Please update again!
Lucia Tsukiyomi-hime chapter 10 . 11/30/2013
Aww i wished you update this story it seemed so interesting
ShakuLover chapter 10 . 9/11/2013
Nice story, really enjoyed reading it! Love the way things are different and those ShanaxYuji moments x3 Hope youre still continuing this story cause im really interested in how it goes on xD
Feng Lengshun chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
You should actually put a summary. I mean, if you can't even put a summary that convince us that it will be interesting, why should we trust that you can make a good story? It's like that so, if it doesn't fit, then shorten it.
Buzsaw Banshee chapter 10 . 7/16/2013
Please upload more if you can. I thoroughly enjoyed this story so far. Brilliant piece of work in my opinion.
Kinunatzs chapter 10 . 4/30/2013
can you continue this fic it's interesting and awesome
BlackZ3r0 chapter 10 . 2/12/2013
Please update! Need more shana x yuji. Btw i really like the way you change yuji, it is so cool and more interesting than the original. So keep writing xD
Misaka 20.001 chapter 10 . 2/7/2013
ugh! I must said that unstable pov is confuse me. Im downgraded into only reader due to final exam so i will point anything i found. First, woa! The battle strategy, you sure gave me a surprise. Second, try to stabilize your pov. As far i know, you still can show what character thought even in pov3 (you called it normal pov) like what harry potter do. But if you still want to continue this, make sure you gave a long time bdore switch to another pov.
Sekai -The World chapter 10 . 2/2/2013
First reviewer in 2013! Cheers! Happy New Year! (even though I am one month late XD)

Nice start, I was hoping to see Yuji coming out but looks like that will be in the next chapter. Hope you update soon!
DsCrystalEyes chapter 4 . 12/31/2012
I, staff sergeant DsCrystalEyes, agreed to non pettanko]]
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