Babes no offense but like isnt she just 18 isnt it creeepy to fly across the country to meet some rando this whole situation is really creepy cos what if edward was some old pervy guy and how tf is she drinking its ILLEGAL

Kind of a rough outtake to end the story...sniff. All's well that ends well, right? Love this fic. Second time through and still love this Edward and Bella. Thanks for the tears and the smiles.

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I really enjoyed this story. I read it in 2 days. I was completely transfixed. The only issue I have is that Kate wasn’t charged with first degree attempted murder and that she received 10 years. That seems unrealistic. Other than that this was a great story.

i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Bella & Edward have Three Beautiful kids

I think Edward needs to work on himself before he is ready to be a father. Way too selfish and controlling. He is using Bella's insecurities and isolation as tools to reach his own agenda. This is gross. Sad that this couldn't have been done a better way.

Outtake pt 3 please EPOV

I have read this story sooo many times and every time I am sad when it ends. They survived all the angst and earned their HEA. Thank you for sharing your awesome story.

I’d heard about this story and only got to read it today. Such strong characters. Interesting to be in both heads and hearts. Bravo
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So I wonder if Kate cheated on Edward or did something else like that to break his trust. Oh and I'm happy that Rose and Emmett met!

I loved Roseand the Cullens were interesting. I am looking forward to learning more about the cause of the tension between Edward and his dad.

I'm not sure how I feel about the speed of everything happening... but I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out!

She's really going out on a limb... I wonder what the first argument will be about lol...

I just enjoyed the first 6 chapters and I cannot wait to see what happens!