|Reviews for At Dusk|
| Man of Kent - Railwayman chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Excellent one shot from what is also my favourite novel
| scorsby chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
This was cute. And very in character and your writing style is really nice and straightforward but also very descriptive. My only qualm, and this is true of all the Mortal Engines stories I've read, is the continual focus on Hesters face. Like, yeah its an issue, and of course mention it, but dont you think maybe by this time Tom would have given over thinking about it so so much. I dont know, maybe not, it just makes me sort of sad i guess that its still at the forefront of their minds.
Anyway, this is lovely and I'm the same, their my favourite books and I always wondered what happened on the bird roads between the first two. Only Im nowhere near brave enough to write it!
Excellent story, Zellxx
| ida4444 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
I couldn't help but smile all the way through.
Keep doing what you're doing!
| Cmdr. Gen. Marasco chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
OH MY GOD MORE MORTAL ENGINES WORK THAT ISN'T MINE! THANK QUIRKE!
Okay, right now that thats done; this is very solid. No worries on your fear of them being OOC. Hester is the supreme badass we all know, and Tom is so adorkable it almost hurts. I do, however, like the little bit at the end. Oh Hester, stop messing with Tom...