|Reviews for Jurassic Park|
| Thunder strike 07 chapter 1 . 5/22/2013
Pretty cool. I really liked this and the way you wrote it I could easily imagine myself there watching this! Super job!
| DK334 chapter 6 . 2/27/2013
I really am enjoying this story. The only thing i have to say is that there are a few grammar mistakes but other than that this story is good.
| MoonlitSorrows chapter 9 . 1/22/2013
So I really like this story because even though there are a lot of Alan's daughter/BillyxOC stories it always starts w/the 3rd movie, not the first. I liked the conflict between Alan & Dawn. However, I do think it would be a wise decision to have a Beta so that they could edit & make it a little smoother. A little side note iPods weren't sold back then &cell phones were mostly used by business men (there are no apps that teenagers would've been on then). Even though this story was published a while ago, you still get new readers, I hope this review could help with any improvements.
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/10/2013
please make Jurassic park 3 soon! this stuff was freakin awesome!
| scarlet tribe chapter 9 . 12/28/2012
| storywriter1994 chapter 9 . 8/13/2012
Nice, but i feel you rushed the end a bt much, though it had my heart pumping. Good job
| M-H1996 chapter 9 . 8/12/2012
Incredible! Sorry if I didn't review sooner :)
| blackangel150 chapter 9 . 8/3/2012
| M-H1996 chapter 8 . 8/3/2012
Great chapter. Waiting on more :)
| ECKohns chapter 8 . 8/1/2012
Great cant wait for the next chapter do you think you could do the sequels
| blackangel150 chapter 8 . 7/31/2012
damn y did he stay up there?
| Toxic Medley chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
This would be a really good story if it wasn't so full of basic grammar mistakes.
You should look into getting a beta reader to help you correct your grammar.
| M-H1996 chapter 7 . 7/26/2012
| M-H1996 chapter 6 . 7/17/2012
Awesome! This chapter was awesome!
| Destiny Xavier16 chapter 5 . 7/13/2012