Reviews for Watching Shinji
Seeking Professional Help chapter 10 . 3/26
I do love the fic, but at times the plot gets hard to follow because of the chaos and action in it.
I'm looking foward to when it settles into drama rather than action.
Love the fic though, and I love the way you write Misato.
COBRASTEVE chapter 3 . 2/18
I am truly enjoying reading this story but at the same time it feels weird to have Asuka dead.. Good story though
Laryna6 chapter 9 . 12/10/2013
Excellent. I was recommended this, and I'm glad they did. Looking forward to where you go from here.
Mon chapter 9 . 12/3/2013
I... see. This is a sort of... Time Travel Deconstruction, yes? Or was that the correct term? Very... True to the original material in that everything and nothing is going according to the 'scenario' and that things are f-ed up for good ol Shinjiboy. And everyone else, too. Grim dark? Or just dark? Nice. Very nice. Keep is up.
BukkakeNoJutsu chapter 9 . 12/1/2013
Fascinating so far.
Seeking Professional Help chapter 9 . 11/26/2013
I think this story is my favourite of yours, it's the way you wrote Misato, paticularly in the first part of the story. The storyline is hard to follow and lacks detail in some parts, but I still love it though.
I think the best Eva fics have little action and more character drama/interactions.
yclui chapter 8 . 10/10/2013
Well, this is quite the interesting premise. Cant wait to see the relationships that develop between our cast members. Keep up the worK!
Rose1948 chapter 8 . 9/8/2013
Alright. Now I'm just confused. Hopefully you'll lessen the confusion in the next chapter. *chuckles*
Attila1987 chapter 4 . 9/5/2013
OK, so we are in the Rebuild universe, and apparently you imply that our dear Asuka faked her death, and now Gendo and Fuyutsuki make their moves, so exciting!
I wonder if Rei still has part of her angelic powers from the last part of the original series, instant At Field hacking should prove very useful right now!
And we have the "next pilot" coming in a week, will it be Mari or Kaworu?

That asides, there is two errors in your story so far :
1/ in Rebuild Misato's rank is Lieutenant-Colonel, and she get promoted to Colonel in the second movie. In your story you kept her NGE rank of Captain.
2/ in Rebuild Kaji wasn't Asuka's guardian, actually judging by their complete lack of interaction in the second movie, they never met before arriving in Tokyo-3
Attila1987 chapter 2 . 9/4/2013
Interesting, we have the classical peggy-sue fic, but this time from the point of view of people who didn't travel back in time.

Seeing that Asuka committed suicide, I guess that she too traveled though time, but couldn't support the idea to live through this hell all over again, and took the fast exit... a very bold move I must say, and it reinforce Shinji's feeling of utter loneliness in this situation where he knows what will happen. He obviously had the hope to meet Asuka again and change things together to change the future... no such luck!

Still I'm surprise that her name is Shikinami, does that mean that we are in the Rebuild universe and that Shinji and Asuka traveled back in time from some events from after 3.0, or did we have the Shinji from End of Evangelion who changed of universe as well as period and is now in the Rebuild universe?

Does that mean that Mari will be here too? I'm eager to start the rest of your story!
KILO151998 chapter 7 . 5/22/2013
Nice chapters, hope to read more soon:-)
Doom Marine 54 chapter 6 . 4/30/2013
When did this fic which started out as an interesting 'time loop' fic turn into a bad Tom Clancy knockoff?
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 7 . 4/14/2013
I like it! **
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
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Guest chapter 7 . 2/12/2013
Well, you're still not giving us any answers, are you? Loving the action scenes, not loving the way it looks increasingly like you're going to kill Shinji off (don't kill Shinji!). Please update this more! Definitely my favourite fanfic right now.
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