Reviews for Akatsuki Yaoi
Cassatrophic chapter 1 . 6/24
damn-you just need one more word. then ittl be 666 Lol
thelivingtree chapter 1 . 4/28
what interesting and very passionate story thank you for making this
Diego chapter 1 . 4/9
I liked the part where they came.
Kaceytron chapter 1 . 4/8
shit
CockGuzzlingNarutoSenpaiSan chapter 1 . 4/9
I had to read this to a Norwegian chick and I really don't give a fuck but I could tell she was masturbating. I would rate this 11/10 but 10/10 because science is not since and failed the climax of the girl.
Oromisa chapter 1 . 4/9
deidaras confession sealed the yaoi deal. 11/10 best fanfic ever
Kage Whittington chapter 1 . 1/18
As a DeiSaso supporter I can not allow this!
billy swartinage chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
this is gay porn right there
damariss chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
ticci toby x deidara
jack eyeless x itachi
pain x diana
masky x tobi
damarissitzamar chapter 1 . 7/28/2015
masky x tobi
Mikazuki miyuki chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Can you teach how to write this
emobaby456 chapter 1 . 12/17/2014
I thought it was a well written story. I enjoyed reading it.
Alde Wicht chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
I love it, how the affection of both characters feel for each other. But when you write, make sure to put it in paragraphs, because it's quite a pain for the eye to have it in all in one text. But in that, keep a good work in your stories, :)

I am going to make a yaoi story as well, I'm still writing my story, so far I made a cliffhanger or the to be continued.

For the rating for the story, I'll give it 8 out of 10 :D
nini minay chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
hermosa
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
You left decent description, but in general more. Press Enter on occasion (in the right spots). But it was good, very sexy :)
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