Reviews for Whipped Cream Doesn't Make Great Lubrication
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14
It was awesome and can you please write a sequel with them in the bath
RavenclawWitch chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Good fic! But, where's the Natsuki x Syo part? found the Satsuki x Syo one, but gosh, I'd really like to read the Nat x Syo story. Please, if you have the link, could you pass it to me?

Congratulations for the fics!
Jasmine chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
Can you do one with Ren, Ranmaru and Masato? So like, Masa is the uke, Ran-Ran is fucking him from the back and Ren is having him suck on him! Also, there is a BL CD for Ren and Masa on youtube! Same for Otoya and Tokiya! Ren and Masa's was just a bit simpler than Otoya and Tokiya's. Tokiya is the seme and Otoya is the uke and Ren is the seme and Masa is the uke. Tokiya and Otoya's was just longer, a lot louder and A LOT A LOT A LOT squelchier. Ren and Masa's were turning it up though! But, sadly, both are in Japanese and have no subtitles! WAAAAHHH! But for Ittoki's, in the comments, someone did a English translation! So please answer this soon!
Mona chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
On youtube they have a BLCD for ren and Masato! Watch it! It made my heart pound, my lower body throb, and I was drpoling and blood 2as everywhere!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Oh my gosh. I have no words to explain how good this is
Cnblue-BOICE16 chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Loved it *w* It was so so sexy! I love how adorable Masato was acting as uke and how Ren was all seductive as seme. Great job, my friend! :D
hananotsuki hime chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
The nosebleed was there though...this was great! It might be the best one on the CD lol, which is awesome! Masanyan...pffft...that name, lol..anyway, he was great and it had just the right amount of him being forced into the situation and it could be heard on teh CD...I'd buy that CD to be honest. Good job! _
AMA CHAN chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
i dont hav annnyyy probs with this...its so so...seeeexxxxyyyyyyy! aww and sooooo cute!
LadyChanel chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
it's precisely the details that you put into your story, you know, the sex, that's what I love. you're a great writer, you shouldn't let anyone say anything different!

xoxo,
LadyChanel
SwampyGreenie chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
"But screw the embarrassment, this felt good." That was like the most perfect pun in the world. xD I loved it!
Marlie Parson chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Aw, I love this pairing!
OoO.Fuwa Ai.OoO chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
great story I love it
KuronoHi chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
*dies from nosebleed* Well done. I really like all your stories! Keep making them _ Just one thing, the only mistake I found was this "Then her jerked his hips up when a hand rubbed over his crotch. "Ah!"
So apparently Masato is a chick XD
Good luck for the future
Kuro _/
Dark Nuriko chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Very nice. That was very much how I pictured the two of them together. So I give you two thumbs up for them. Awesome job.
kei-taiga chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
well then... *wipes blood off nose* that was rather enjoyable. *begins cleaning large pool of blood from table* I just love these two! they're adorable! good work! *passes out from the cuteness*
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