This fantastic! The description really creates the scene. And I love how you don't mention the eyebrows, you should keep it that way XD

Please continue this story. I understand if you don't want to but this is really good and I just glove this

the most perfect start to a beautiful story. I love you

I adore this!
More please!

This is really amazing! *A*

I think I'm already in love with this fic, and your writing now too!

I can't wait to see more of what's to come

Yay! Another story from you xD, I'm so happy!

The story started out quite good and I'm already captivated by your writing and story again. I love the way you portrait the Queen, so beautiful, so mysterious and breathtaking. XD I'm becoming Alfred number 2. And the rule just angers me, how unbelievable and ridiculous it sounds. How can you pay for your emotions enough? We live with them, be human because of them and there is, like, an infinite amount of emotions we have. I want to kick that bastard of a king's arse (...sorry for my language).

Anyway! I really hope to read the next chapter soon. Thank you so much for writing :D *heart*