Reviews for Origins of Aizen Sosuke
NZ chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Heh, not back Jarl! I wrote something similair a few months back its called Guilty God and its quite a bit darker, but still...Jolly good job on this and I hope to see more soon S
The High Demon Lord chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I like the idea behind this story...

Please continue it
KingOfTheIceLord chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
A llttle disappointed about Hogyoku, but I understand. To many plot holes. Anyway, good start to this fic. Can't wait to read more.
Nara110 chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
It was gd i lk fored to the next chapter i hope u update sn.
3master chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I like the pairing so far. Are you gonna do a harem? If so can you Mei from Kiri, Samui and Yugito from Kumo, and Konan from Akatsuki. No konoha pairings if your gonna do a harem cuz this new naruto is more like a calm and collective type and the girls in konoha won't match him, maybe kurenai, yugao, and maybe hana.
Uber Ghidorah chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Aw, Hogyoku was an awesome story. Oh well. Perhaps it will be picked up one day.

Anyways, this story is pretty good as well. It looks pretty interesting. I'm interested in if Yoruichi will find out what Naruto would become or how he became Aizen.
OregonDucks chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I really like it
vanetsu chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
i like the idea of this story but honestly other than that its too early to get a good feel for anything else and im also curious if hell be in the same old team 7 or a new team.
ddcj1990 chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
Sweet you did a great job with this chapter I really like it alot
Silber D. Wolf chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
great chapter
Sir sleeps all day everyday 12 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
Well this is quite an interesting chapter but I would like to see more of it before I give a reaction but it's in the positives right now lol also who is in the paring besides yoruchi please no Hinata also might I suggest mei terumi :) update soon.
Storylover213 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
please please do continue i want to see if Yoruichi can stop Naruto from becoming Aizen or does something Happen to Yoruichi that causes Naruto to become Aizen
meow114 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
nice start, i hope that history has changed and nauto doesn't die and become aizen in this universe, meaning Yoruichi came from a alt-universe. plz update asap XD
Killjoy3000 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
very interesting but a question how was she sent back was it an accident or did the shinigami king do it to try and change stuff?
alchemists19 chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
I have you say this is a story that has me wanting more.I like the idea and can't wait to see what happens next and yoruichi's reaction to when she finds out Naruto is aizen
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