Reviews for Return to Narnia
Guest chapter 52 . 11/6
Please upload I love this story
sorafallenangel11 chapter 52 . 10/27
Good chapter. I liked the discussion between Ella and her parents. Looking forward to more
FANGIRL6000 chapter 52 . 10/27
This is the most amazing story I have read in a long time. I love her and Edmund together to! Also she is no Mary sue which makes it soooo much better than any other story I have red on this site. I love the fact that you did not make Edmund some love sick school boy, but that you stuck to his true character! Love you and this story heaps and can't wait until next chapter! xxxx
Paradox Tremors chapter 52 . 10/26
Fantastic! And believable. Loved the chapter. Sorry it took so long to review-had problems signing on the site.
D.N.S Akina chapter 52 . 10/25
Wow I don't know her parent like that. But I glad Ella give advice to them
sorafallenangel11 chapter 51 . 9/28
Brilliant story, I love it. I hope there's more with Narnia in it and I'm looking forward to seeing Ella meet her parents. Please update soon
Paradox Tremors chapter 51 . 9/20
Another great chapter. Maybe Ella will get some time with her sister-I doubt very seriously their parents are in attendance. I'm curious as to what Ella has gotten her sister as a graduation present. Enjoyed it very much.
Paradox Tremors chapter 50 . 9/12
It's good to see Ella and Kara keeping in touch w/one another. Maybe they can share an adventure or two together with Aslan at some point. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out-hurry!
Paradox Tremors chapter 49 . 9/12
Ella has her sister and now she's torn between that and her love for Narnia. I hope Aslan will help her conscious to sort through the mess. Another good chapter my friend.
Paradox Tremors chapter 48 . 9/12
I'm glad Kara believes. It makes things easier and I do hope she and Ella will become close and always stay in touch. Maybe Kara will get to see and experience Narnia with Ella.
Paradox Tremors chapter 47 . 9/12
It's funny how Aslan can "pop" up anywhere and to anybody isn't it. I'm glad he helped Ella and Kara finally get back together. They needed each other. I can't wait to see how this will end.
Paradox Tremors chapter 46 . 9/12
Kara's been waiting for her sister; that's great. Maybe all of Ella's questions and doubts will be answered and erased when the two sit down and talk. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Paradox Tremors chapter 45 . 9/12
It's always scary to take that first step into the unknown, but Ella has already proven she can face up to it if she so desire. I hope she can find and contact her sister like she'd promised. Enjoyed it.
Paradox Tremors chapter 44 . 9/12
It's good to write down the things you never want to forget. The mind has a terrible way making us forget the bad and making it seem a lot better than it was; and the good, not as great as it was. Love the chapter.
Paradox Tremors chapter 43 . 9/12
Another great chapter; glad you didn't end this after the battle. I hope Ella finds her sister.
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