Reviews for Before The Day Is Done
Guest chapter 10 . 12/4/2012
That was sad
SiannR chapter 10 . 12/3/2012
This is possibly my favourite story about Lauren on here!

It's so well written and! haha I can't really explain it.

Well done! and please keep writing this? :D

StayStrongxox chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
LOVE this story :D Please update soon :D x
KlarolinexDelenaxx chapter 10 . 9/25/2012
i love this! read it all tonight! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update :) Lauren is probably my fav character, love 'er (& i am really looking forward to her and Joey storyline) anyway i love the Lauren and Antony romance you put in here, i think they are cute together :)(on the show not so much but here i love them) and i love that all he friends are so good to her, its really sweet... when she went missing idk who i wanted to find her either Antony, Tyler or Whitney... But it was Antony which was cute :) and her interaction with little Oscer were soooooooo cute/and the sisterly convo was nice... But want i really wanted was more Whitney/Lauren stuff, as you said most people asked for more Lauren and Tan but i would have liked more BFF moments with Whit and Lauren, but i ain't too sad because she had a moment/s with Antony... did i say cute? lol caise it was, Soooooooooooooo CUTE

Anyway Please i would love you to update this real soooon :D i hope you can (yn)
WordsAreFutileDevices chapter 10 . 9/19/2012
Yay! An update! Anthony is wonderful. Such a shame he left the show instead of Tyler to be honest. He would of been good for Lauren. :/ Little Oscar is so cute! He seems to only interact with Max or Tanya and never his two sisters, I swear! Or is that just me? :S Anyway, it was nice that you included those moments between him and Lauren. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Account Moved. Xx chapter 10 . 9/18/2012
Fantastic chapter,
I'm glad you're still updating this story,
It was definitely worth the wait,
I love how realistic you showing this storyline as possible.
I really love Lauren's scenes with Anthony and Tanya.
The scenes of her playing with little Oscar were adorable.
I'm glad Lauren admitted the name of the person who hurted her and hopefully they will find them
Keep updating :) xx
Guest chapter 9 . 8/29/2012
I haven't forgotten about this fic. ;)
EverAfter-xox chapter 9 . 7/25/2012
Beautiful chapter yet again! I really like how you're taking Lauren slowly through her recovery in detail and aren't just rushing it:) love the Lauren and Tanya scenes and really hope we get to see Lauren tell her the whole story soon. Can't wait for your next update!xxxx
Account Moved. Xx chapter 9 . 7/25/2012
Brilliant update! Aww I love how all Lauren's family and friends really care for her. I like how you brought in flashbacks of when Lauren was raped and all her feelings when she thinks back about it. I like how Anthony worries over Lauren, it shows he cares about her which brings in a bit of light into this wonderfully dark story. I also like Jack and Tanya in this chapter aswell. It's a shame we never see many scenes of Lauren with her uncle Jack nowadays, I've always liked their relationship and I love Tanya being the wonderful, caring mother she is. I can't wait for the updates, this was worth the long wait. Take care xx
Chezza456 chapter 9 . 7/25/2012
Wow, I haven't read this in ages and I thought that I'd better catch up with what I've missed. The chapters that you've written have been amazing- so emotional and so real. I can imagine every second of this story; hear everyone's different voices, as the quality of your writing is truly amazing. You have taken this serious matter and performed wonders with this story by writing and exploring it in this way, especially with Lauren's character.
I like the small aspect of the beginnings of something between her and Anthony- it shines a bit of light and hope over this otherwise very dark and depressing storyline.
I love reading it and finding out more about how Lauren and her family and friends are coping with all of this. This story is so interesting and intriguing that I can't wait to read more. I shall wait patiently for your next chapter. Take as long as you need, because this perfection does not and should not be rushed.
Chez x
WordsAreFutileDevices chapter 9 . 7/23/2012
Nice to see an update! :D I loved Jack in this chapter. He and Lauren don't have enough scenes together on screen. Would love some more interaction between them in this fic. Tanya is great as always. Looking forward to the next update, of course!
Account Moved. Xx chapter 8 . 7/9/2012
Wonderful chapter hun. I really like the scenes of Anthony and Lauren. Aww bless, he's so lovely to her. I also like the friendship scenes of Lauren and Whitney having a film night. I wonder where Lauren went to in the last scene, hope she doesn't get into trouble and I hope the Branning brothers Max, Jack and Derek will sort out those horrible guys after what they did to Lauren. Keep updating and I can't wait to read more chapters of this amazing story xx
WordsAreFutileDevices chapter 8 . 7/3/2012
Wonderful update! Anthony is lovely. Have the two of them ever actually dated on the show? They would make an interesting couple.

Omg, where is she headed though? i'm hoping she bumps into someone before she gets herself into trouble. :(

Update soon please.
EverAfter-xox chapter 7 . 6/19/2012
Amazing again! Sorry it took so long for me to get this review up:p but you've really created a lovely relationship between Tanya and Lauren and every chapter is written so beautifully, it's amazing! I really can't wait to see where you go with this for chapter 8! Please update soon! :)xxx
Account Moved. Xx chapter 7 . 6/13/2012
Wonderful chapter, it was worth the long wait. I really like how Abi is supporting her. I think she is such a wonderful sister to Lauren. I like the details about Lauren's nightmares and how you described that she is still scared. I'm glad you added more scenes with Tanya. I really enjoy watching her motherly relationship with Lauren on the show, I can't wait to see more scenes of them together aswell as scenes with Abi, Whitney, Tyler, Anthony, Fatboy and Lucy. Keep updating and I'll look forward to the rest of the chapters xx
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