|Reviews for What Partners Are For|
| a chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Don't worry. You're not the only one who likes Penhall better than Hanson. Penhall is like a giant teddy bear. He's just plain lovable. Penhall was my favorite 21 Jump Street character. Officer Anthony "Mac" McCann was my second favorite.
The way you characterized Penhall didn't completely match my perception of the character but the story was really well written. (I can't see Doug as a trouble kid. I see him more as 'the weird kid.' Mostly due to the bullying episode and his goofy side.) The conversation between Hanson and Penhall sounded natural. It wasn't forced or overly melodramatic or sappy. It was just kind of honest and uncomfortable, which is what it should have been.
| JPsmiles chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
LOVED this! Nicely done! And Doug was always my favorite! :)