Reviews for Touhou Doujin: The Misadventures of Yukari Yakumo
The Kindly Hater chapter 16 . 6/28/2012
Eh, this says "comment" but I'll just make the assumption it means "review".

To Hebiko, authoress of this story. You're narrative was enjoyable, and the few moments of self depreciation slipped in were good for a few chuckles. However, if you intend to continue this hobby of yours, I recommend speaking to Dawitsu about the two godsends for all stealth characters: Stealth Camo(which you could also probably get from Nitori), and a cardboard box. You'd be surprised how those two items can save you from being compromised.

To Duwee Davis II, true author of this story. Reading scenes from previous stories of yours from a different perspective has been a refreshing experience. I apologize for my disappearance, but for a while I just got... I guess the best word is tired. I was just tired from Touhou overdose. Anyway, is there going to be an epilogue for your other story? Because I only read chapter one(see read the first paragraph and a half, then skipped to the authors note and the rest for the rest of the story) and want to save my review for the last chapter of that book. I hope you enjoy many years of inspiration. Fare thee well!
Hideki Hirameshi chapter 16 . 6/10/2012
Yuyuko really is smarter than she lets herself to be. We all thought she was being an airhead, randomly making references to food. This epilogue proves otherwise.

I've read this book of Hebiko's from start to finish... what can I say, she really is the saner one, snarky side comments aside. And yes, Yukari was the center of the story.

Good job!
Metroid Life chapter 16 . 6/9/2012
And so another story ends... a very interesting lesson from Yuyuko, and I have to say this was a great story, indeed. There's... not much else to say, but thanks for the story, Lady Hebiko, and good luck to you. And... someone visiting Tokage? Hmm, that sounds interesting...
Metroid Life chapter 15 . 6/8/2012
You know, if she wasn't so apatetic, I'd almost believe she was the reason satoris are forced underground... and Yukari's being nice to Yutaka, how sweet!
Metroid Life chapter 14 . 6/6/2012
Yuyuko, if you hurt Mystia I will EAT YOU! And Yukari... apologized? Wow, didn't see that coming.
Metroid Life chapter 13 . 6/4/2012
Ah, so Ran doesn't grasp why Dawi would care about Yutaka... for some reason, that makes me think of her having a mental breakdown... probably because it reminds me of Soul Eater... ah, memories... anyway, the "hue" comment was certainly odd... did the Satori know someone named Hue? Or maybe... Nue? interesting... reviews, do do dah... wait, Yuuka may take over Gensokyo? NEVER! Mima-sama, the true master of Gensokyo, would never allow it! Anyway, see you next review...
Nicolas Crossworth chapter 12 . 6/1/2012
Quite a sad chapter for me, heh. Imagining Dawitsu grovelling over the loss of his cute, sweet, delicious shikigami, yet still it was a bad move rejecting Ran like that though if I were in his place, it's completely understandable. Hebiko getting spotted lighten up the chapter a bit and so did the reviews heh. Aya seems like a good person here, finally she grew some tact.
Metroid Life chapter 12 . 6/1/2012
Oh Tokage, such a fool. Writing isn't always about shipping! Heck, at this point, YOUR story isn't really about it either. Dawi and Yukari are married in it, so they aren't being shipped... at this point it's just the aftermath. And if you think there is no DRAMA in other kind of STORIES, then you are a idoit...

Ah, I've turned this review into a insult... oops. The story, anyway, is certainly interesting, and our narrator seems to have a rather low opinion of her subjects. For instance, she thinks that the loss of her pet Iguana is far more devasting than Dawis loss of Yutaka... it give me the feeling that she sees them as... well, beneath her. Amusements. Playthings. Not that this is a bad thing, it's a very interesting way of doing this, to be sure. Anyway, see you next review, Lady Hebiko.
Nicolas Crossworth chapter 11 . 5/29/2012
Heh, Dawi really drowned himself there, huh? Ah, the review? well why should bother with a review? The thing is perfect! Sh-shut up Momiji! Unlike the other one's story this here is a block buster! It's a good chapter, though Yukari was really a b**ch here with her words...
Nicolas Crossworth chapter 10 . 5/27/2012
Oh Yutaka you sly girl, seems like Ran's jealous, paru paru paru paru.

Good as always, no noteworthy flaws that are major enough to be pointed out, I actually enjoyed the battle here.
Metroid Life chapter 10 . 5/27/2012
Ah, it seems that ship has sunk... or has it? Chat room indeed... oh, I was supposed to review the story? Well, the fight was certainly detailed, with a deadpan snarky finish that makes it shine... now that I think about it, does Dawitsu have any bombs? Hmm...
Metroid Life chapter 9 . 5/24/2012
Oh, come now, Tokage must be smarter than someone... like... like... um, Cirno? Bah, why am I defending her anyway! I don't care about her! Not at all! Anyway... you seem to mention arson a lot... nah, it means nothing. All in all, a good chapter, and the end was perfectly climactic. And... Dawitsu cares about Tokage? Hmm, how interesting, a word which here means "irritating"... well, see you next review...
Metroid Life chapter 8 . 5/24/2012
Ah, foreshadowing... I never could get the hang of it, myself, though I bit hard when I don't know what I'm writing next... anyway, I do like the story, though the constant references to the ladys dead Iguana are a tad bit annoying... still, she's greaving, and it's not like it's exceptionally annoying...
Nicolas Crossworth chapter 8 . 5/22/2012
There goes Yukari in her evil scheme...

But everyone who read the first story of the series should already know how will this ends XD

Great chapter BTW
Metroid Life chapter 7 . 5/18/2012
Ah, she wants the 'destroyed' look for her home? My forshadowing senses are tingling... And Ran, I think the reason you saw hiom as nice back then was because how you see him now is coloring your perception of the past. And Yuyuko... if I could get her, Yukari, L, Light Yagami, and maybe a certain Shikigami around a chess set... it would be glorious, a match that would be remembered for all of time... Well, anyway, this is a great chapter, and I eagerly await the next one. Judging from your words, I'd say Tokage is feeling better... excellent. Well, see you next review...
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