|Reviews for Shirou Emiya: Erogame Protagonist|
| wejkoo1 chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
This is one of the best story's I have ever read and I safe to say if this isn't one of the most amazing fics on this site then I don't know what is. But if your going to be making more of these SE:EGP crossovers then I agree with ArcherXX on his idea of Majikoi.
Firstly because its is a really good VN with very good plots and lots of fight scenes and no to mention the main girls all have good stories to them.
Secondly the VN was basically made to be a harem but the makers decided to just fuck it and make so that you can pick only one girl. I haven't played the 'true route' so don't judge me.
And finally its FUCKING SHIROU I mean the character was made to get the girls around him doing his hero stuff. And I would really like to see an interaction between him and Kazuko both with their own ideals and dreams.
And I apologize if I made any spelling mistakes since English isn't my main language and I'm still working on my writing.
| kroz phantomville chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
Its a shame this nice piece of art doesnt get enough reviews. You could have got more if you divide it into 2
| Unyouthful Steve chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
There was so much win that I couldn't handle it all at once, just simply amazing.
| ArcherXX chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
I am still laughing ... This is awesome!
I think it would be not a bad idea for Zelretch to send Shirou into Majikoi
1)it has a plot ... I think 2) Harem 3)a lot of fighting ( opportunity for Shirou to show who is the boss )
Thank you for your work !
| Isaac Prewett chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
"I kinda wish Archer was here so I could rub his face in this."
Hahahaha I'm sooo getting this Monster Girl Quest, this is the second fic i've read from you using this, and it looks amazing!
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one :D
| Hitokiri Onib chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
... I want Archer here.
I want Kid-Gil MGQ. It would be hilarious.
His rants will shake the world and his unbendable ego will have him fighting Ilias anyway.
I also want plenty of omakes where he loses.
This wish will never come true. T_T
Also. I can't wait for the MGQ part 3 to finish translating.
Good Job on the story. I loved it.
I found it funny, Irreverent. but skipping out the fight scenes just to keep the tone just broke it for me.
Will keep reading your stuff
| ArcticTempest chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
I beg of thee gabriel blessing, MAKE AN OMAKE WITH ARCHER!
| Anon42 chapter 4 . 8/14/2013
also, Alice's "Horahorahora" is extremely disturbing to me, because in my native language of Swedish "hora" means "whore", so my brain automatically translates the "horahorahora" as "whore whore whore".
All that aside, I will admit that I laughed. A lot.
| Twigon Halolover chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
This has topped my list of favorite Humour fics.
| kaoslord1982 chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
Is there such a thing as amused outrage? I'm pretty sure that would be the best description of my reaction to your throw away gag about the origins of Love Angel Flonne. I'm pretty sure she was never a big fan of rape, but whatever.
I can't help but wonder what is happening with the Sekerei. Did Miya ever manage to catch Karasuba, and if so, did the Black Sekerei resign herself to her fate?
| XRazor chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
Bwahahahahahahahaha! I didn't think it was possible but you did it GB, you did it. You surpass my rather high standard for sheer insanity for literature. I mean Anti-Silly? Shinto? Moodius Killious? What the hell dude? You killed my cheeks via weaponizing humor. Of my face... so much laughing...
Incredible work as always. Kinda wondering if you can somehow surpass this. If you can awesome! If you can't, okay, this still more than makes up for it.
Keep up your awesomeness,
| tenchifew chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
Really enjoyed it. Charactrization was top notch, as always.
Thank you for writing.
| Cjonwalrus chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
Flonne being some kind semi reformed rapist is probably one of the most hilarious explanations for her love freak ways I've ever read.
| twigggy chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
Truly, the power of BAR is without rival.
Not even the vaunted and mythical Tohno Gland is so perfect in it's function.