|Reviews for Shameless|
| Shaylynne chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
THIS IS AWESOME. CONTINUE! :D
| ILoveJamesSiriusPotter chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
good, very good! I loved the last sentence "She falls asleep in his arms." cute. Keep updating, please.
| Incendiarist chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
This is cute. I like your characterisation of Thalia, and that's pretty rare, for me. Not much of a fan of Thalia at all.
It's a bit odd that Luke hates the gods even before getting to CHB; I'd have thought that that came later, when he sees that they don't care about any of their children, that it's not just a thing about /them/. I always saw him as ultimately noble, ultimately just trying to do what he thought was right.
But maybe that's just me. XD
All in all, good work. No grammatical issues that I saw, and, hey, I'm a sucker for present-tense, so...
| i made my mistakes chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
I don't know about other readers, but I sure liked it! This oneshot is really good writing quality. Hopefully, this will encourage you to keep writing! :)