Reviews for Empire
ThedemonlordPingu chapter 1 . 3/7
This story is really good
Please update soon
Darkling83 chapter 30 . 9/30/2013
more please!
SaiyanBlast chapter 30 . 6/2/2013
i like it is really good
Addictive Label chapter 30 . 7/14/2012
well.. its pretty good really slow going tho.. i am looking forward for more.. hoipefully you will update soon as it has been nearly 2 month now.
Addictive Label chapter 2 . 7/14/2012
Finally i have found another story that deals with the "build an empire etc" i usually just find boring stories that is about SG-1 and their travels.. 10 seasons of it is enough.. i want to read about the beginning and build up of empires in the galaxy... so hopefully we will see the story continue..
Haruka Kasumi chapter 30 . 7/13/2012
I like this story. How long ago it is before SG film? Plese update soon.
Lord Drenghul chapter 30 . 6/27/2012
Interesting story. Please continue.
karthik9 chapter 30 . 5/29/2012
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
gjjones chapter 30 . 5/29/2012
very good

now all she need is a ind.
thunder18 chapter 29 . 5/27/2012
enjoyed reading this chapter
karthik9 chapter 29 . 5/27/2012
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
Kaylen Cooper chapter 29 . 5/27/2012
Ohhh. Interesting! :o

Can't wait to see what happens. :)
gjjones chapter 29 . 5/27/2012
what!
karthik9 chapter 28 . 5/27/2012
it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates
DHB-Spike chapter 28 . 5/26/2012
Congrats on the 25K length of an awesome story. Keep up the good work. You may want to expand Gerak's character in the next chapters, maybe make him Myac's or Culsa's second in command; or the ever difficult forbidden love... Gerak and Samunda the Jaffa and Goa'uld "Romeo and Juliet."

Also, just an idea, but you could draw in a lot more readers if you combined some of your chapters at some point to make it an about an average of 2K per chapter. At the moment it just feels like the chapter often ends at a commercial break instead of the episode's end. But considering your update speed it feels more like a commerical break compared to other authors' speeds.
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