|Reviews for Mine|
| GrooveCharge chapter 1 . 4/12
This doesn't even deserve a half star...
I relate to Eragon especially since how similar our love lives are. Which is why I find stories like these to be abominations.
HolleringHawk65 says that Murtagh is better for Eragon than Arya. My response is, in what way? They literally tried to kill each other the entire time. And then there's the fact that they're brothers.
But if you'd actually read the books, and I mean READ the books, then you would probably know that Arya does have feelings for Eragon. There are subtle hints in the last three books. Also if you'd follow the author then you'd know that Eragon and Arya will still end up together in the end. Which is overall why stories like this are abominations. They don't stay true to the characters, then it is truly not worth any real fans time.
| Yona0 chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
I love you. This is only the second fic of IC that I've read, but I want to read this pairing already...I hadn't even imagined it when reading the book (or so I tell myself. I was in denial about my tastes back then) but I want to read this so badly now. Thank you for creating this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Mmm, I definitely like the story- though I do not understand why it is M-rated?
| HolleringHawk65 chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Murtagh is sooo much better for Eragon than Arya could ever have been!
This is great!
| lilfanficbug chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
| Witchdoctr chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Ahahaha, sexy without being overly explicit, nice.
| MoonProphecy chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
| silentwinged chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
I really liked reading this! I hardly ever read short pieces, but they always intrigue me as to how the entire story and history and background are all revealed in so few words. Very well written! Thank you for writing, it was awesome 3
| GauntletRunner chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
This was really awesome! So going in my favorites...
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
I love it ) just the perfect amount of angst to keep it interesting...and actually I think it gets to be fairly obvious that its Murtagh towards the end there...