Reviews for The Beggining
KeptinSight chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
Please continue soon.
sexbell chapter 1 . 5/9/2012
i think you got a good story here

but you need a beta to help you as it is hard to read
And chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
You spelled the title wrong.
Ugh chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
You just need to stop. You obviously write yourself a glowing review and then delete any bad ones. If you won't take constuctive criticism to heart and, instead, insist on deleting them and deluding yourself, you need to just stop writing now. This might actually be worse than your other one, although at least a few of the 'I's are capitalized this time.
mar chapter 3 . 5/7/2012
WOW!This is fantastic iam totally hook. I read all the chapters they are awesome. When are updating ? Please, please:-)