|Reviews for The Girl in The Woods|
| Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 8/16
That's...melancholy. As a tip, you could stand to use "I" a little less. There's ways around it, even writing from first person. Also, saying the sky turned a light dark blue is a contradiction. Something can't be light and dark at the same time, they're total opposites.
Lastly, if this is indeed not fan fiction and moreover not related to Pan's Labyrinth, you need to remove it and place it instead on the sister site, Fictionpress dot com. That's where original work goes.
| Winter Blue Dragon chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
I like it so far, please update soon -