|Reviews for Nightlock|
| rosie.horgan.7 chapter 21 . 2/15
Join the resistanceeeee! :))
| annieledark chapter 21 . 2/15
First of all, interesting story! I like it.
But, you're right. The time doesn't quite make sense here. She couldn't live in the arena for a year, because you described just too little about how she felt, what she did and where she went in the arena. Just doesn't feel right.
Then, say if she was for a year there, and say you oriented around the time the rebellion began in th book, the rebellion would be so huge now that Johanna and Peeta would be already in the Capitol, being tortured. Also, the Capitol wouldn't let the citizens travel just like that to the districts, because they were in the rebellion.
If Johanna was alive, and in D7, she would take them to D13 right away.
So, better right it all down and just you know, fix it somehow. But if you think all you wrote is what you wanted, leave it be! It's your fandic, and I have no right to tell you what to do :D
Your story is great though, continue!
| Gillian Lizotte chapter 12 . 1/10
Oh that is so not fair. I didn't plan a review but it just happened. So now it's like, OMG forget about parents. Helloooo Dylan
| rosie.horgan.7 chapter 20 . 12/27/2013
| nevergone4ever chapter 20 . 12/27/2013
I love Johanna :)
| HarryPotterNut1 chapter 20 . 12/27/2013
Great plot and stuff :)
Sooooo excited for the next update!
| xx-Want-A-Sugar-Cube-xx chapter 19 . 12/15/2013
District 7 would be awesome!
And then they could be friends with Jo.
| julie662 chapter 19 . 11/14/2013
I love dani and Dylan so cute . I would go for district three because it's a less eventful district and yet it has a close relation with electricity plus it has beetee who makes an awesome aliance partner
| Victoire Collins chapter 19 . 11/1/2013
I think they should go to 7 and then somehow make friends with Johanna and be part of the rebellion.
By the way, amazzing chapter!
| Pre-Ragnarok chapter 2 . 10/31/2013
It would be funny if they think that Foxface is a ghost and run off, screaming their heads off...
| Victoire Collins chapter 18 . 9/22/2013
Amazing! I can't wait to know what the problem is ! You have to update soon, the suspense will kill me!
| Daenerys Dunham chapter 4 . 9/13/2013
I think she should be alone, but that's just me. Keep writing, it's awesome!
| Daenerys Dunham chapter 3 . 9/13/2013
Have the rebels find her! I love the story so far!
| I.C.2014 chapter 6 . 9/4/2013
This is really seems cute so far
But it seems to me that things can't just continue on like this. Eventually the people who handle the Games may stumble on to them, won't they
| vampirevampirevampire chapter 17 . 8/24/2013
omg she should go with him please update