Reviews for The Maiden of Hope
LoneWithaMission chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
Casteliacone! Casteliacone! Make her try a Casteliacone!
Quilava Flare chapter 5 . 7/20/2012
I'll be honest with you. I didn't particularly like this chapter. As I said before, the small things can make it. But then again, they can also break it. Those little grammar or spelling mistakes really build up over time, creating a less apealing affect. Besides that, the chapter I didn't really like. Was it maybe because it seemed a bit... choppy? Seemed almost like it left something out...
Oh, and was Nurse Joy being serious? Being mobbed doesn't seem to fit her persona. Otherwise, keep it going! Unique towns and gyms spice things up a bit. Rock themed leader is a new on me...
mnm12345 chapter 5 . 7/9/2012
This is very good Lit I like the Durant :)
NakOfTime chapter 4 . 7/1/2012
I like it a lot so far! Can't wait for more. HNNNNNG pokemon...
Quilava Flare chapter 4 . 6/25/2012
Good. I could tell that you definitely made things realistic, so I liked that. It almost makes me think the main character is actually a boy... but... yeah, it's definitely those small details that really change the story. Oh, and um... just pointing out that technically it isn't sin. Even though... eating pokemon sounds kind of gross. I wonder what torchics taste like?
Luka chapter 4 . 6/11/2012
Hey Lit!

It was short, but I liked it. Eating the Patrat was an interesting touch. In Pokémon they go on about how pokémon are friends and stuff, as it is a kid's show they obviously never mention eating them. My favorite part was when she cut herself accidentally with her knife. I don't know, I guess that just made it way more realistic or something.

Keep up the good work!
Spiral Breeze chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
Wow, she ate a Patrat. Nice. I loved how she said that she had sinned. Also, what a great catch for Kylie!
Apollo77 chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
You're right, it does seem a little short, but still good. Omgomg Mantyke! I love that cute little thing, glad Kylie caught one. Hope that longer chapter gets written soon!
mnm12345 chapter 3 . 6/1/2012
Great story cant wait for CHAPTER 4
Quilava Flare chapter 3 . 5/19/2012
Nice. I was very interested in your unique perspective to this story. Very... Straightforward is what I want to say. Anyway, I would love to see what happens next in such a fast paced story.
Eleni chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Update soon please

Drew: havent heard you say that in a long time

Drew, I have a question

Drew: what

Why you so stupid

Drew: screw you

Fuck you

Why you little grr eleni just go die in hell.

No you

You

You

You

You

You

You

You

Drew, your an idiot
Apollo77 chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Damn, love how you wrote Caine. You should give him darker Pokémon to match his personality, then have one cute poke just for laughs, like a clefairy or something. Keep it up!
Spiral Breeze chapter 3 . 5/14/2012
Another nice chapter Lit! Poor Durant. When is she gonna catch another Pokémon?
Spiral Breeze chapter 2 . 5/8/2012
I want to find out more about her past as well as her father's and Pokémon's.
RinxLenKagamine4EVA chapter 2 . 5/8/2012
This is an awesome Chapter 2, both the chapters so far have been excellent! Keep up the good work and I hope you'll write more!
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