|Reviews for Contemplation While Jumping Out Of Windows|
| Stars May Fall chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
I loved how we were in river's head in this story, and got to see that her hatred for the doctor is not truly gone, but that its tampered by love which makes the difference for River. Because no matter how she tries to escape she loves the doctor and he loves her.
I also liked in this story how she gets a forewarning to her death, maybe you can write a story where she gets more clues, or stops her death. I seen lists of stories where the doctor saves her, but I think it be interesting to see River safe herself, with or without the doctor's help.
I loved this story, thank you for writing it.
| JaneScarlett chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
so beautifully written! I loved this insight into River's thought process, and her examination of her feelings. Great story and look forward to reading more from you ;)
| Nightsmoke chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Beautifully written! Nice point of view and character insight. I really enjoyed this :)
| Sylva Dax chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
All I can say is wow. That was powerful.
| cmartlover chapter 1 . 5/7/2012
This story is extremely well-written! I liked the ending and the way you explored a rather dark River.