Reviews for Saviour's Burden
S chapter 4 . 11/15/2014
Reading this for the third time. Still love it!
Lily M.85 chapter 11 . 1/31/2014
Your story is truly amazing, love it so far!

I see the last time was updated in Sep 2012. I really hope you'll decide to continue with your story, please update soon!
TheElegantFaerie chapter 11 . 10/9/2013
Will Black Hat eventually develop feelings for her? Please update soon! I love the story so far! :)
Guest chapter 11 . 8/31/2013
Please continue! This is the best Black Hat fic I have come across. I love the dynamic between the two of them, and you write BH so wonderfully!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
lemons are good, but half-ass lemon hints suck. just insert lemon. its perfectly fine. you want an example of porny-fic? i have got one. even the resident evil fanfiction: heaven for one hell for some doesnt count as a porn fic, and they fuck every chapter at least twice! so dont worry about it mkay?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
i LOVE bad boys to the point of obssession. I mainly go after the red-eyed black-haired and pale-skinned type, scars preffered.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/24/2013
Oooh, more please! Though I couldn't bear it if Black Hat did end up the same way as he does in the movie! :)
Bucky Flavored Skittles chapter 11 . 1/26/2013
I love your story so much! :D I can't wait to read more, you're an amazing writer, and I don't know why you'd ever say you're not great at lemons because you definitely are!
Jess chapter 11 . 10/16/2012
Love the story. Especially how realistic you keep the characters. Please please please update soon!
Dalonega Noquisi chapter 11 . 9/21/2012
Living this story. Hope she does eventually come to love him. Even if he is a prick.

;) Can't wait for more
Caffiend04 chapter 11 . 9/14/2012
Damn, woman! The whole over the shoulder thingie? You have such a delightfully fertile imagination. I love how even with the "loooove venom," she is still very much her. I love how consistent the voices of your characters stay...more, soon, please?
williewildcat chapter 11 . 9/14/2012
I think someone hasn't been laid in a loooooooong time! That or he just gets the power of knowing he can get what he wants from her ;) I think I would lean towards the latter on this one.
Caffiend04 chapter 10 . 9/9/2012
When you decide to show back up, you certainly make it worth the wait, don't you? Seriously, I've been thinking about you all week-I was about to PM you in some sort of desperate, non-stalkerish way.

The combination of the "vamp tranquilizer" and being able to have some control over her body is brilliant. And natrurally that would make her hate Black Hat even more.

My favorite line: She'd balked at riding with him, probably because she didn't trust herself, saw her body as treacherous and him as evil for causing and taking full advantage of it.

And this: You have been warned and some of you are delighted. Oh, you know us SO well! Welcome back, my friend. Please stay around a little longer! This has been like Christmas and like...Arbor Day all mixed together.
williewildcat chapter 10 . 9/8/2012
:D Awesome!
Seraphim Arcana chapter 9 . 7/17/2012
I agree that in order for this to work, she'd have to be drunk. I initially thought she was a little too silly, but that's just cause I'm reading this sober. And silliness while drunk is absolutely mandatory. This is great and I eagerly await more.
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