Reviews for Original Stream
Konri Kari chapter 6 . 5/25/2013
This is great!
thechinskyguy chapter 2 . 5/20/2013
Hmm. This isn't too bad. You seem to really like using Lance, something that we both have in common. The plotline is interesting, to say the least. My only gripe is that when you use dialogue it's sometimes hard to distinguish it by who's talking. Other than that, this is good.
Konri Kari chapter 4 . 4/12/2013
This is great!
Spark Plug x chapter 4 . 6/12/2012
Poor Lance! He's such a good guy, I feel so bad for him
Spark Plug x chapter 2 . 6/4/2012
I really like this story, but it's a little confusing at some points for me.