|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Natural 20|
| jub chapter 71 . 5/21
It has been days and I caught up and now I can finally test
| Mariagoner chapter 13 . 5/17
Here's for Milo getting some real character development - as well as leveling up! :D
| Mariagoner chapter 11 . 5/17
Awww, Milo! He and his team are so adorable!
| Mariagoner chapter 2 . 5/17
My god, Milo is such a hilariously fun character. I am in love!
| Guest chapter 72 . 5/14
Are you OK, Sir Poley? We're worried about you.
| SirRealism chapter 72 . 5/15
The police parts are still lots of fun (yay awkwardness!) But waiting for them to intersect with the main plot is becoming terribly frustrating. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| SirRealism chapter 49 . 5/14
At some point I think the police story arc became my favorite part of this story.
| Grant chapter 30 . 5/11
Reading this, it is awesome! In answer to your question: Quirrell's plan is both BRILLIANT and transparent. Just because a plan is easy to see doesn't mean it isn't a good plan. Having the heroes do the work for you is a villain trope after all.
| Yawrf chapter 72 . 5/10
I've loved your story! Are you going to do any more of it? The Last update was over a month ago
| GalanthaDreams chapter 72 . 5/9
I love the plot, the subplot-I adore everything about this story. I know this is not exactly the longest review but the feelings are sincere. I'm looking forward to what you dish out next.
| GreatWyrmGold chapter 15 . 5/8
It's nice when a plan comes together, but it's so much better when half a dozen crash into each other and leave flaming mangled wreckage everywhere. Usually metaphorically.
The Veratiserum water balloon was brilliant. I need to remember that next time one of my characters gets his hands on a potion/poison/etc that works in absurdly small amounts.
Milo's casually, cruelly efficient. Reminds me of Dumbledore's warning about him falling...
| GreatWyrmGold chapter 13 . 5/8
Philosophy literally means "love of knowledge". What's the word for "love of quasi-profound philosophy in works of fiction"?
| GreatWyrmGold chapter 12 . 5/8
It seems like McGonnagal's title(s) should have been mentioned alongside those of everyone else attending (except Hermione).
Ah, abuse of the rules. The greatest trick in a wizard's bag.
| GreatWyrmGold chapter 11 . 5/8
It's one heck of an unbalanced party. Five primary casters, without a Cure spell between them (unless Hermione learned Episky already), and the closest thing they have to a meatshield is Mordy. But still, it's a lovely scene, all the better for finally hitting Milo in the heartstrings.
| guyhaiku chapter 72 . 5/4
I didn't like Fiona at first, but now I get excited when the narrative shifts to her