|Reviews for The Red Queen meets The Black King|
| Lucinda Silver chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
I like this and it is interesting. As for the spelling errors,
'Madison's eyes went wide with shock along with Kylie's as Lollie in an act of bravery leaped forward taking the shot insteed of her mistress, falling onto the ground heavily the dog's blue eyes turned dim and lifeless while protectively laying ontop of her mistress's body using herself as a sheild.'
You wrote 'insteed' instead of 'instead' and 'sheild' instead of 'shield'
| katmar1994 chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
I love it already!
| Esmereilda chapter 18 . 11/10/2014
lol everything can :D but personally u let the enjoy their free time without alois ruining it
| Esmereilda chapter 17 . 11/10/2014
thats relief every1 is safe and more or less sound
| Esmereilda chapter 16 . 11/10/2014
i can honestly say that i would not mind a angexgrell pairing one bit in fact it sounds kinda cute
| Esmereilda chapter 14 . 11/10/2014
lol its strange that will and sebby can actually agree on anything XD
| Esmereilda chapter 11 . 11/10/2014
| Esmereilda chapter 7 . 11/10/2014
ur not actually gunna pair alois with ur oc right, RIGHT?! i much prefer the ciel/oc pair u have going atm
| Esmereilda chapter 4 . 11/8/2014
poor kyle :( but i prefer ciel over grell any day :D
| Esmereilda chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
um grell is a guy in the canon eventho he is very effeminate so wouldnt father/daughter technically be better? well anywho nice start
| MishuraHana chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Lol frying pan like Chi Chi from DBZ
| One Sapphire Rose chapter 18 . 10/18/2014
OOOOHHHHHHMMMMMEEEEEHHHHHHGGGGLLLLOOOOBBB WHERE THE POOP IS THE NEXT CHAAAAAAAAPPPPPTTTTTEEEEERRR
| One Sapphire Rose chapter 4 . 10/18/2014
HSHEJDBCBJZKAODJCBBCBLALALLWKDCJBDBSJ OMFG WTF CIEL?! Ok, I admit that his love is awesome. But seriously, it's also creepy, obessive, and stalkerish. I sincerely hope that he will understand true love.. Anyways, good work as always! Rose-Chan, Out!
| One Sapphire Rose chapter 2 . 10/18/2014
OMG I SOOOO LOVE IT! Hehe I really wish Grell was my mother- getting off the topic! With that little nuzzle scene, I was laughing so hard and crying in fangirling at the same time
| realecielshieru chapter 18 . 7/5/2014
I've read two of your stories today and I love them both.
This one is very much unique _ From what I could tell.
I'm looking forward to read the next chapters and find out what could happen without the Phantomhive servants for a whole day? A burned mansion perhaps? XD
Hope to see you update soon.